The Angel and the Soul

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" REWARDS" FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, (c),

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An angel, in his heavenly tranquility, observing the lamentations of an inconsolable soul because of its upcoming incarceration within the walls of mortal flesh, turned towards it and calmly said: " Be patient dear soul for manifold your rewards will be for such a sacrifice !" © Demetrios Trifiatis 27 March 2018

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/31/2018 7:19:00 PM

Dear Demetrios, a deeply beautiful and intriguing poem. This soul's patience will be rewarded with the wisdom that allows the soul to evolve to a higher spiritual plane when the soul's 'incarceration within the walls of mortal flesh' is over. Exquisite poetry dear friend. Warmest wishes and Happy Easter! ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2018 1:35:00 PM

- Comforting words from the angel, lovely written my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/27/2018 10:46:00 AM

Patience and sacrifice do indeed bring rewards as long as we follow the true path.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/27/2018 11:54:00 AM

Absolutely true. my friend, Tom! Thank you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/27/2018 6:49:00 AM

Reward comes in many forms..like the beautiful flowers in your garden..well expressed truth, my friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/27/2018 9:25:00 AM

True my friend, Vijay! I am happy you like my flowers! Thank you!

Maria Williams

Date: 3/27/2018 6:25:00 AM

Imprisoned Souls in the mortal flesh, a torturous life ahead, no wonder the Soul is inconsolable. Patience and rewards ahead, it must console itself with. A wondrous personification my dearest friend Demetrios and a fave....Maria xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/27/2018 6:30:00 AM

Thank you for your precious comment my dearest friend, Maria! Hugs xxx

Silent One

Date: 3/27/2018 6:02:00 AM

Patience is the key to everything my friend, well expressed..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/27/2018 6:32:00 AM

With patience wisdom comes! Thank you for your sound comment my friend, S.O.!