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The Rabbit

THE RABBIT A country rabbit well-versed in survival tactics in local fields near town. A pack of town dogs thinking to have a little fun with the rabbit - Kick some serious rabbit-ass for amusement : maybe grab it. No cats or pigeons about, so why not? The pack was uphill, she was down. They chased the rabbit with much barking and snarling into the field - Into pools, across ditches and through hedges, Over the cropped barley stalks and sedges : She led them a merry dance for fifteen minutes, wouldn’t yield. Like old guys with tight jeans, shaved heads, and tattoos uncouth, Trying to keep pace with some hot seventeen year-old girl on disco floor. Sweating, tongues hanging out, drooling, faces flushed,wanting more. Floppy muscles driven by ego but not powered by youth. Urging each other on with empty bravado and snarl, Out of shape, out of luck, entirely laughable. She left the field and galloped up the street, fully able, Even further ahead of the pack; and they, exhausted by the girl, Collapsed, clutching their dreams of big-time rabbit action. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck Entered in Carol Brown's Contest "Bunny Rabbits"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/4/2012 8:49:00 AM
Congrats on your bunny win! Rhonda:)
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:25:00 PM
SYDNEY... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/2/2012 3:56:00 PM
Sydney, very nice write. Congrats on making Carol's winners' list............................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this bunny tale xx
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Date: 2/29/2012 10:48:00 PM
winsome riddle , KC... congrats on your award, big time! :) hugggs!
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:28:00 PM
LOL a wee bit too sophisticated for the audience LOL Congrad's on your hoppi' good win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/29/2012 9:22:00 AM
Quite unique. Congratulations on the win. Very clever.
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Date: 2/29/2012 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece and thank you for supporting my "Bunny Rabbits" contest Sydney. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2012 1:48:00 PM
A great entry for the bunny contest. I enjoyed the action packed read and found myself cheering for the little bunny. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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