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The Day We Met

THE DAY WE MET O cursed was the day we met in Auschwitz God had forgotten us that day Another day of hell The brief candle of daylight was snuffed away Through the walls of steel In this prison-coffin built O cursed was the day we met in Auschwitz What was our guilt ? O hateful the day we met in Auschwitz When dawned their hatred for us Out of the darkness -In their twisted animus -Out of their hands of bloody butchers -Out of their hearts of cold steel O hateful the day we met in Auschwitz To whom could we appeal ? O hopeless the day we met in Auschwitz Many more this day would be dead And see no dawn tomorrow All our yesterdays - fear and dread - Pharaohs had pursued us from time immemorial From Egypt, Russia, Gerrmany O hopeless the day we met in Auschwitz Could this day end only in infamy? O hopeful the day we met in Auschwitz Where in the day’s mist I found you Wandering within barbed wire wearing stripes Just another skeletal female jew Until I saw you smile The darkness was pierced by sun O hopeful the day we met in Auschwitz Should I again allow my sand of time to run? Oh joyful was the day we met in Auschwitz God was so good to us that day - by chance The darkest hour was just before dawn My hoped-for deliverance From the walls of pharaoh’s butchers Was found In your smile warm and embrace Oh joyful was the day we met in Auschwitz Can time this memory ever efface ? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for Paula Swanson’s BESEECH contest By Sydney Peck

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Date: 4/19/2011 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/18/2011 11:11:00 PM
Oh, my goodness, Sydney. NO WONDER this one got first place. It's like a perfect model for this new poetry form that Paula invented. You really relate to the Jewish people.ARe you jewish too? How to think of something like this? just marvelous creativity!
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Date: 4/18/2011 2:01:00 PM
an inspired write about a difficult subject and an excellent moral outcome, love is a difficult thing to kill. BIG congrad's on your verse winning Light & Love
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on a remarkable entry and win. Love, Jyce
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Date: 4/18/2011 8:12:00 AM
Oh...wow...this is beyond my expectations...so moving, and powerfully emotional. A wonderful 1st place winning poem! Congratulations!!
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Date: 4/18/2011 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win Sydney in Paula Swanson's contest "Beseech". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 6:24:00 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win : )
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Date: 4/18/2011 4:10:00 AM
Ah!!! Sydney, Thi stirs the emotions to tears. So deserving of FIRST PLACE!!!!! Many congrats. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:53:00 AM
A stunning piece. congrats on your well deserved win. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:52:00 AM
Congrats Syd on your first place win in Beseech contest.. another great top ten victory luv..
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Date: 4/17/2011 10:01:00 PM
Many Congratulations Sydney on your worthy 1st place win in Beseech contest.Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
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Date: 3/24/2011 7:03:00 AM
I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Sydney and I wish you the very best in Paul's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2011 1:33:00 PM
I can't even imagine what it was like to be present at Auschwitz, Syd. Through all the death and hardship, perhaps there were some who found solace from others who shared their fate. You really created a masterpiece using the form prescribed for Paula's contest. We hear only of the sadness and it's so uplifting to think love might have brought moments of joy. Truly astonishing poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/23/2011 1:17:00 PM
Wow, Sydney, this is amazing, I was enthralled from the very first word, I had to read it again, just wonderful, I hope it is a winner in the contest, because it is a winning poem, no matter . . . It brought me right there within the barbed wire, wow~~
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