Get Your Premium Membership

The Last Battle

THE LAST BATTLE In a huddled lump, old soldier on Front Street, But the hurrying winter crowds never even see him As they stop for hot dogs in the snow on a child’s whim. An army of people pass but no one wants to meet The salute in his eyes; and he greets only feet As he pulls his old medal tunic around his one limb In a huddled lump. Long months since his last time to eat meat Or fill his battered metal cup to the rim. Clutching his sheet as his battle memories dim, He finally falls in defeat fom the hail of sleet - In a huddled lump. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck on 21 July 2012 Entered in Nette Onclaud's Contest RONDINE - THE TRAFFIC OF LIFE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/8/2017 5:39:00 PM
Poor Vet. Makes a revelant point mate. Did u friend me on Facebook recently, If not it's the crappy hackers...?
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 11:58:00 PM
Sidney ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 7:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 7:47:00 PM
Yes a unique aproach here !Congrats on the win Syd!
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 5:14:00 PM
you really did the contest in a most interesting way. unique and a well deserved win, Sidney.
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 3:21:00 PM
Sidney congrats on your win..like this one...David
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 3:08:00 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Great idea for the topic...Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 10:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this outstanding write, Sidney! Knowing it's a true story makes it all the more powerful....love and blessings
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 8:50:00 AM
KC, you start and finish with the strokes of poignancy... congrats on your stunning win in my contest... and the fee is----. just kidding.. this so gut-wrenching i needed a comic relief... salute!..:) huggs
Login to Reply
Date: 8/1/2012 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your superb win Sydney, like this one xx
Login to Reply
Date: 7/21/2012 1:31:00 PM
Sidney, this is excellent! Such a tender and poignant write. Best wishes in Nette's contest. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Login to Reply
Beck Avatar
Sidney Beck
Date: 7/22/2012 2:59:00 AM
So glad you liked it.....it's based closely on an old guy we saw only days ago on Nevski Prospekt in St Petersburg (Russia) where we live......thankfully in reality he didn't actually fall and die.....bestwishes to you Rhonda

Book: Shattered Sighs