The 20th Day of October

The dawn came late, pallid sun peeping over the horizon scarcely bright enough to scare
away the night sky.  The pale moon sinks reluctantly in the west, as the first rays, still
cold in the colder air, strive to melt the frosted grass.  A chill haze hangs above the
ground, almost glowing in the early morning light, hiding the long shadows of the autumn
browned stalks 'till they are nothing but anonymous smudges on the temporal canvas.  Such
a fine crisp morning, though it chills to the bone, in some devious incomprehensible way
its beauty warms the heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
January 11, 2011 at 8:10 AM
Wow....this is a beauty! Just beautiful, Nick !!
Ammutlinra Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Wonderful, Nick" Love it ( Lin~RA )
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 4:59 PM
Very descriptive prose poetry..Sara
K. Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 1:37 AM
This captivated me, Nick :)-- very beautifully described and I can't help but feel that chill-wonderful way with words you have here-- btw I hope you don't mind me pointing out the apostrophe in "its" for your last line, I believe it doesn't need it :) hope this helps -- thanks for sharing this awe-inspiring day with us! :) nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 8:59 PM
wow, what a wonderful way to put to words this day that you so enjoyed. I love when nature speaks to us this way! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Very vivid and visual Nick and pleasant to the reader to absorb its lovely lines.. feeling the cold and frosty chill here in New Jersey this windy day and your poem is so apropos luv.. enjoyed..
Maverick Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 7:27 AM
very pleased to read this work, well done nick.
Devonshire Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 6:29 AM
What a lovely description of a crisp Autumn day, Nick!! Enjoyed your verse very much. Best wishes, Carolyn
Robinson Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Hi Nick This is s lesson on the use of imagery to create a setting - you really paint your 'picture in words' very skilfully! Best Wishes Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Nice narrative write on the 20th day of october, Nick
Hill Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 11:08 AM
enjoyed this write of fall very much..TAH
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