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"You'll be trapped in Tomorrow" Says Tonight It urges me to stay here Sabotaging it's arch enemy, the next day Each day fights the next, not wanting to hand me over That's how mistrust creeps in "What do you know Tonight that you aren't telling me. Is Tomorrow scary?" Tonight isn't justifying it's intimations 00:02 All discussion stops That's the way to really brew fear I think I'll close my eyes and lay in the dark

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Date: 5/18/2023 10:40:00 AM
so now I'll be laying there....wondering if they're talking about me.....thanks a lot.
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Date: 5/18/2023 10:50:00 AM
Ahh sometimes I'm on tonight's side, they usually make a good argument. Lots of fun times had with a little whisper from tonight to stay
Date: 5/18/2023 8:46:00 AM
A lot of angst in this, but it's great! I loved your idea!
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Date: 5/18/2023 9:11:00 AM
Haha I'm more resilient to my angst and anxiety than my words suggest, thanks for your kind words :)
Date: 5/17/2023 5:35:00 PM
Quite a novel and interesting thought play DD. Like this....
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Date: 5/17/2023 6:11:00 PM
Thanks Paul, very quickly jotted down but quite liked the idea :) thanks for your comment

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