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That's When I Met You

When the clouds came down covering me whole, When the darkness made sure I was left all alone, When you drizzled over me washing my fears, That's when I first met you dear! I remembered then the enduring days, When a girl approached me daily in various ways; I remembered once glaring into those deep beautiful eyes, When I caught them staring at me near the aisle. A wonderous smell then filled my room and then I realised that this girl was you! Wearing black, when you placed the flowers on me, that's when we had our first divine touch, But unfortunately my body was then too cold to sense so much. Few moments have passed since I met you, But they made me realize that have always secretly loved you. But I guess I took too long to realise, cause' am going to stay in this coffin for some while, But I promise this coffin's door won't keep us apart, For we'll unite ,when we both become bright twinkling stars.

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Date: 8/12/2024 12:06:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 5/9/2020 5:10:00 PM
Thanks for your entry Parimal!
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Parimal Gangurde
Date: 5/10/2020 2:24:00 AM
Thankyou for considering my poem eligible sir!

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