That's Not Safe
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Amongst spruce oblivious of the way,
As I admire the wonder all abound.
Birds fly above dancing their own ballet
All spruce trees spread their fragrance all around.
The compact wood is hushed before night fall,
Arrive at a bridge shocked at what I see
The chances of crossing are very small.
Trying anything is indeed no key.
The bridge is thin, its boards are worn and weak,
Yet still I stride with steps so bold and free,
A goodly warden approaches to speak,
I stop so afraid and wanted to flee.
Fear grips the warden, he utters a call,
"That's not safe! So beware, lest you should fall."
Place 3
Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2025
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