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That's Life

torn, twisted lies he thinking, blinking, sinking I one looks up, declines .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/20/2015 6:49:00 AM
Huge one, thought provoking senryu.. though am not sure if I understood it well, but what i can understand i find it lil funny.. :O kindly explain to me.. :O!!hahaha!~olive eloisa
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 4/21/2015 10:50:00 AM
thank you.. :) on the last line I imagined something else thats why i find it funny.. :)
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James Fraser
Date: 4/20/2015 1:12:00 PM
A broken man on the edge of being revived, when he suddenly decides it's not worth living, he declines, that's it, hugs//Dino James xx
Date: 4/17/2015 4:06:00 PM
Excellent pen James! This is a deep and very profound senryu ,dear friend.Enjoyed reading it.A 7 from me!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light! God bless you!:)D.
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James Fraser
Date: 4/18/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Dorian, I smile widely when I see you here. Blessed weekend to you also, smiles always, James :) :)