That Was Then and This Is Now

Then
A domestic drudge, Pam had cooked countless meals
She laundered his clothes and hung his shirts just right
He walked ahead as Pam remained at his heels
From his torment she cringed, cowering in fright
As her health suffered, he quickly turned away
When he threatened to leave, Pam begged him to stay
Her confidence shot, self image destroyed
She craved companionship to fill a sad void

Now
Her “strut’s” returned; Pam no longer lags behind
Keeping pace with companions, equality
Mental health’s improved; she clearly speaks her mind
Sometime’s even enjoying frivolity
Pam’s image is not now maligned before friends
To a callous critic, she makes no amends
Her canvas now fresh, the brush is in Pam’s hands
Creative efforts don’t respond to demands




*January 21, 2019
For Silent One’s “That Was Then and This Is Now” contest

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Date: 1/28/2019 11:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great winning poem, Carolyn :) - I had several ideas for this contest, but did not post any of them :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2019 11:59:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 1/27/2019 3:05:00 PM
Back with congrats Carolyn on your splendid win.
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:11:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Carolyn :)
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Date: 1/27/2019 8:26:00 AM
Nice take on the contest, showing how a person life changed through something she felt she needed.. well expressed Carolyn.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/25/2019 8:08:00 PM
Sounds like she was reborn again, beautiful strong women are meant to speak up. lovely sentiments Carolyn. Winning wishes.
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Date: 1/25/2019 12:06:00 AM
You have moved her into the modern times and brilliantly so Carolyn! I hope this poem does well in Silent's contest. I found it empowering! : ) xxoo
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Date: 1/24/2019 3:48:00 PM
The two faces of life, love how you delve in to personalities, Carolyn...In fact the poem says so much more, than the words one reads..love this..
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Date: 1/24/2019 3:37:00 PM
Carolyn, love this write, way to go Pam!
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Date: 1/24/2019 9:46:00 AM
I love the choice of theme and the vivid contrast between the first and second stanzas, Carolyn. Starting afresh is not easy, but once the decision is made, a person surely gets a new lease of life! In my eyes, deserving of a top win. Hugs // paul
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Date: 1/23/2019 3:11:00 PM
you were so smart to set it up like this: showing her past and then the wonderfully changed present. Just exactly what I think Silent One had in mind for his contest.
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Date: 1/23/2019 7:38:00 AM
I like the transformation you depicted..so alone and in pain then..so confident and able now. This informs of many lives..so much meaning in your story. All the best to you, Carolyn.
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Date: 1/23/2019 4:10:00 AM
Beautifully done Carolyn, greetings from Ireland. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 1/23/2019 12:02:00 AM
Hi Carolyn, great entry for the contest. Reads like a winner to me. Contrasting stanza's that truly sing to me. The first brings on the sadness then the second brings on the joy. Way to go Pam. I hate to see women. It is such a joy to see the change in Pam. No woman should be subserviant to any man. A strong read. Reads like a winners list entry to me. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/22/2019 6:47:00 PM
go pam! this is a great take on the contest, carolyn! wonderful poem...
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Date: 1/22/2019 6:05:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, This is a good entry for contest. I like contrast between the two stanzas. You did a great job. I hope to see you on the winners list. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/22/2019 5:41:00 PM
WOW! Carolyn well written my friend want to trade poems? lol Best of luck my friend in the contest!
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