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That Ring

that ring you gave me cheap like your lackluster love broke around July For Raul Moreno's Sentiments of the Heart Senryu Contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 1/19/2011 6:13:00 AM

wonderful write with a tinge of humour--karmakar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/16/2010 4:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrea in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall

Date: 3/15/2010 6:05:00 AM

Super, love it, I have to admit I missed the competition completely, but I'm not surprised ou've won, well done

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/14/2010 3:55:00 AM

A well-deserved win, Andrea. My congratulations to you. (^_^) Noel.

Marty Owens

Date: 3/13/2010 6:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2010 5:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your success Andrea. Agape, Moses

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 3/13/2010 4:07:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea...I really like this...and a great win! Love Jeralynn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/13/2010 3:19:00 PM

Congrats Andrea my friend on your winning poem and placement in Raul's recent contest.. knew it was a winner first time I read it... u go girl.. another trip to the winners circle..so well deserved for a great write..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/13/2010 2:57:00 PM

Andrea, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

James Fraser

Date: 3/12/2010 4:13:00 PM

ouch > James

Danny Nunn

Date: 3/10/2010 6:05:00 AM

What a message!!!! Nicely done...glad you liked Keep Going...Thanks Danny

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/10/2010 1:29:00 AM

*Cringe* one could feel the loathing in this--very nicely done---this should be in the winners! I'm sad though--I wasn't able to write one in time for this :(---oh well...

Slight Buckling

Date: 3/9/2010 9:43:00 AM

Touche! Sarcastic indeed. Cleverly crafted. Thank you for your comment and thanks for reading.

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 3/8/2010 9:10:00 AM

Wonderfully written senryu here Andrea! A great entry into Raul's contest. Wishing you the best of luck! Thanks so much for sharing! God Bless~Mary

David Byrne

Date: 3/7/2010 8:16:00 PM

OOH, nasty.............lol!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/7/2010 5:51:00 AM

Really Soup mai, Andrea! Great Senryu! Yes sometimes love can break as easy as cheap rings, very true! Yes, Andrea, I remember well the 70's songs. Sometimes late night is best time for writing! Wish you good luck for the contest! And thank you for your welcome comment...Have a great time!...Gert

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 3/6/2010 9:25:00 PM

soup mail

Marty Owens

Date: 3/6/2010 8:41:00 PM

Wow...a different approach...me likey!!! lol Good luck in the contest....Marty

Susan Palli

Date: 3/6/2010 11:09:00 AM

Typical! Hope it's not true. Susan

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/6/2010 1:34:00 AM

Well thats great, some couples who know its true, many of them just lie to themselves. must be so hard. but you alone, you don't lie. -Always&Forever Lynette

Brian Strand

Date: 3/6/2010 12:05:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Andrea.Rgds Brian

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 3/6/2010 12:04:00 AM

I have a broken ring too, unworn for decades in a jewlery box of my memory..., I even lost the key to open it :( (probably he is fat, short and bold by now :) Thank you, Andrea, for your comment on the paranormal (spooky, wasn't it? ...and true) Love, Iolanda

Noel Villarosa

Date: 3/5/2010 9:10:00 PM

A dull lackluster love will not shine even wearing the symbol of oneness. Great poetic message here, Andrea. Thanks for sharing this. Appreciate so much of your time in congratulating me in haiku poem. (^_^) Noel

Daver Austin

Date: 3/5/2010 3:11:00 PM

The Sheeber is like the crocagator, with a croc head on one end and a gator head on the other. It be very mean. Well? How does it eliminate? It can't. That's what make it so damn mean. LOve, daver

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/5/2010 2:35:00 PM

ut oh....hmmmm....provacative! Light & Love