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That Dark Place

That dark place, between what is real and what is not, that look on his face, that tells the story of his endless trot. His mental state is unstable, his sanity hanging on by a thread, his is not willing, nor able, to forget the dark thoughts in his head. And that dark place, with the thoughts that eat him away, is an untouchable place, that will always be in the way.

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Date: 7/3/2016 1:24:00 AM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, CHRIS..SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2015 12:09:00 AM
Chris Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Chris Hope
Date: 8/1/2015 12:11:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome (: I'm joining many forums to try to meet people. I started a YouTube channel where I read my poetry, and have been getting good reception. Let's see where this site takes me (: *hugs*
Date: 7/31/2015 5:09:00 PM
Chris, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/31/2015 4:26:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
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Chris Hope
Date: 7/31/2015 5:12:00 PM
Thank you for reading (:

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