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Thank You Grandma

My grandma meant a lot to me. She reached into the dark place where I was lost and brought me into the light. After my sister died in childhood I went quiet. You see she died on my birthday. I dwelled in an imaginary world, a fantasy world where I felt safe. But, grandma refused to let me stay there, she bought me a journal and special pen and told me to write my pain," write your pain," she said. I did and do, did she know that she was creating a writer. Over tea in fancy cups we would read my words often with tears. She inspired me to write more and more, to share my words, "write it, write it dear, for the world to read," and I did and still do. When grandma died at ninety-four I was broken and shattered. She meant everything to me. I was asked to do the eulogy for her and on the day of her funeral I stood in the church trembling. My three pages of paper written fluttered away and I was frozen. Then, I heard a whisper, "you don't need the papers," and I began talking. The words poured out and when I finished I heard the weeping ...
the snow is falling on the cemetery tombs one word seen grandma
____________________________ February 16, 2023 Poetry/Haibun/Thank You Grandma Copyright Protected, ID 02-1525-838-16 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, It Means A Lot To Me sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 03/04/2023 Seventh Place

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Date: 3/4/2023 12:02:00 AM
I miss my granny so...your poem is warm and lovely, memories so alive and filled with beauty. Not as beautiful as you though... Congrats and God bless you, Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2023 9:27:00 AM
Gina, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my fine placement, and for the compliment, and congrats, we will always miss our granny grandma's, blessings and love, Constance
Date: 2/22/2023 9:16:00 PM
Oh .... What a touching narration and what a strong bond between you and your grandma. Her encouragement has led to the birth of a great poet and we are thankful to her that we can now enjoy your beautiful poems.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/23/2023 8:51:00 AM
Valsa, thank you so much for the nice comment and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/17/2023 11:50:00 AM
I know Pain I have felt it You own yours and use it profoundly I am honored to share the same planet as you This is just one of many writes that make me see water Deepest Regards A.S.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2023 1:09:00 PM
AS, thank you so much for the visit and nice comment and compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/17/2023 5:39:00 AM
your words are priceless dear friend, I love this, and you. Grandma would be proud of you.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2023 1:10:00 PM
Mystic, thank you so much for the compliment and nice comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/16/2023 7:52:00 PM
I was drawn into your world with your words, tone and imagery. The fact that you started early writing makes it appear effortless to produce such a powerful and emotional piece. I’ve always been a fan of your work!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2023 1:12:00 PM
Pace, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, yes, I have been writing since childhood. It became my way of healing. And from that a poet was born, blessings, Constance
Date: 2/16/2023 2:27:00 PM
So moving, Constance. and so correct about the efficacy of writing for exploring emotion, even difficult ones. I especially like the haiku. It is such an exact form and that is its attraction; variation is not haiku to me. See Basho. Elizabeth
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2023 1:14:00 PM
Elizabeth, thank you so much for the compassion and compliment, I also like the exact form of haiku but admit to exploring, blessings, Constance

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