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Th' Briny Whore

I'm a briny whore wit' reekin' drawers me honor ter make yer acquenchance th' skipper's maid me port's decayed one doubloon, yer seafarin' urchin? Yer scurvy rat a-crawl wit' gnat orf seadog scourged wit' rabid yer cannon's immense 'tis cocked 'n tense yer cutlass be yearnin' me scabbard Yer stench o' sewer me bits'll chew yer bumps 'n boils 'n rottin' flesh yer britches singe yer helm unhinge ter boot yer hornpipe thump 'n thresh 2013-11-20

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 12/19/2013 7:12:00 AM

Ah yes, never get tired of reading this and laughing til my tummy hurts...Congrats to my sassy and scintillating South African friend - Tim

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/19/2013 6:42:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your well deserved win, delysia

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/18/2013 10:54:00 PM

Hello Delysia, enjoying this one again...Miss you, :) sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2013 5:51:00 PM

hmmm we are thinking about bad girls hmm I like to do dialect once in awhile too, see my new one. Light & Love

Muhereza Rodgers Roger

Date: 11/28/2013 12:57:00 PM

I thought i understood but, but....I do

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 11/28/2013 10:25:00 AM

A sozzled mariner, perhaps?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/27/2013 8:10:00 PM

Hi Licia, you got to tell me what the wink wink was all about... hehehhe.... Soup mail...please.... Linda

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/26/2013 9:18:00 PM

There you go again, makin my tummy muscles ache!...You must have been a pirate in another life (Did I mention I rather LIKE briney whores?) - Tim

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/25/2013 1:06:00 PM

Voila enjoyable slangish poem. Briny mermaid mayb. Hey u write super cool fantasy eh. Fondest regards

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/25/2013 9:11:00 AM

licia!!!..definitely a vivid write made onlt fron your own poetic brew.... a loving b..ch you are; splendid write.. spill in, sweet , naughty one!..:) huggs

Joseph Matose

Date: 11/25/2013 7:55:00 AM

I enjoy this kind of stuff. It sounds to me highly creative. Rhyme thrown here and there makes the poem a lot out of this world. Thank you Shamwari. JM

Joseph Sergi

Date: 11/24/2013 6:09:00 PM

unique and entertaining very well done!!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 11/23/2013 3:50:00 PM

Highly entertaining stuff you composed tastefully to the reader's utter delight. Your wittiness shines through here my friend. I am impressed by your poem, so it was a good overall penmanship on the poetess part. Smiles :)

Len Gasun

Date: 11/23/2013 3:03:00 AM

This is so brilliant & creative artwork my dear friend Licia. Kudos! I'm so much entertained this afternoon by this splendid write of yours. Thank you so much for sharing! Wishing you all the best. Thanks as well for your precious time to read my latest work. Have a great wkend my very dear friend. I'll be back to read more. love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/22/2013 2:39:00 PM

Very bold and unique, very entertaining, Licia! I like the pirate theme in this poem. I have written a pirate themed poem, but I just haven't gotten to post it, yet. Great work on this one, my friend!...Thank you so much for the great comments, once again!

Terrell Martin

Date: 11/22/2013 9:00:00 AM

Hello there you naughty sailor girl! Apologies for going "off the grid" but had to move back from Egypt and look for a new gig. (Still looking)...Missed you and again, APOLOGIES for staying gone so long. I'll try to do better and by the way...LOVE this scurvy bad-girl poem:) Cheerios "Matie," Terry

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/22/2013 8:00:00 AM

They must have to drink a lot of ale to get into the mood. This one kinda grossed me out but was hilarious all the same. Ha ha I just noticed the Captcha starts with VD. Very fitting*lol*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2013 5:14:00 PM

oh, gosh, you really captured her essence and how delightful the way you had her talking to the johns. GREAT fun and clever writing.

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/21/2013 7:38:00 AM

I echo Donna's comment!!! And then we could...... ????

Donna Jones

Date: 11/20/2013 8:48:00 PM

Oh Delysia....I'd luv to spend an evening out with ya..having a drink and laughing....I think you're awesome...

Richard D Seal

Date: 11/20/2013 6:39:00 PM

Only you could get away with this Sister dear lol. I'll never look at a sword in the same way again hahaha. I truly believe you are visited by the ghost of an old friend of Bluebeards for these pirate writes, lol. Wonderful. Take care, Richard. The capcha for this is EEKS. How appropriate is that lol

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/20/2013 3:17:00 PM

Shiver me timbers - you have wriittne a good poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish