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Text Me ;)

There once was a naughty girl from L.A. On Halloween she put on a display She got dressed as a cell phone Her push buttons made men groan And she led many men far astray.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2010 3:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Deborah in Irma's "Halloween Costume Contest". Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2010 2:53:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your big win in Irma's cool contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy this win with luv..my friend..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/26/2010 1:33:00 PM

Congratulations on this well deserved win, Deb

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/26/2010 1:26:00 PM

lol, too funny, congrats on the win!

James Fraser

Date: 11/26/2010 9:37:00 AM

haha, alluring Limerick Deborah. Congrats on your win >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/26/2010 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations Deborah on your witty limerick and win. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/26/2010 3:32:00 AM

hahah. I sure can imagine. many congratulations for this win.

Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 10:13:00 PM

Debrah,CONGRATULATIONA! and Sorry for judging my contest late. Once again I love the taste of my # 1-10 placements. Enjoyed the thought and smiles. Thanks so much for my contest entry, have your self a wonderful & bessed holiday~luv* SKAT

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 10/20/2010 11:45:00 PM

Hahaha nice one Deborah. I really enjoyed reading it. Best of luck with the contest. Taha

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/11/2010 5:04:00 PM

okay got it, D.G., texting is my game., enjoyed, have a good one,...P.D.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2010 5:43:00 PM

heeheeheee!!!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/8/2010 8:28:00 AM

Excellent, beautiful, so funny and amusing showing the crafts and skills of your writing perfections. Great Limerick. I have placed a new poem today & in next, two three days I am introducing a new form of Poetry on PS. Hope you would enlighten me with your valuable comments and suggestions and on its technical part. Love and best wishes always......Ravindra.....Deborah Guzzi