Terzanelle

I do like trying to write these Terzanelle This form can be challenging and fun to learn But, these can be smooth like ringing bells I put forth thoughts in a certain pattern Trying my best to get it all written right This form can be challenging and fun to learn It is time to take the Terzanelle flight So read on my friends, it is now here Trying my best to get it all written right Writing these forms, I am getting near I am learning more as I continue to try So read on my friends, it is now here Mistakes can happen, if you wonder why Parts may not make sense sometimes I am learning more as I continue to try So, onward I go with the continual rhymes I do like trying to write these Terzanelle Parts may not make sense sometimes But, these can be smooth like ringing bells Heidi Sands 8/8/17

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 8/9/2017 11:40:00 AM

Another beautiful Terzanelle poem, Heidi!:)) Well written!Be blessed!:) D.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Dorian :)

Roy Pett

Date: 8/9/2017 10:04:00 AM

Brilliant Heidi, I like poetry written in form, ( I must write more in form) your writes are interesting and inspirational. :))

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 10:11:00 AM

Thank you Roy. This form is turning out to be fun :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/8/2017 9:59:00 PM

Yes, your writing is inspiring my friend! Especially when you did my favorite form, the Villanelle! I love Rispetto's and Villanelle's, and I haven't written them much lately...maybe I should write some! I really enjoyed your awesome poem here Heidi! You have written a tremendous piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 6:00:00 AM

It would be great to see you write a Villanelle Russell. I am happy you like this one :) Thank you

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/8/2017 7:47:00 PM

I haven't a clue to write one. Yet! Lol! You do write beautifully and you made it look easy. You and your writings inspired me Miss Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 7:49:00 PM

Thank you Akkina. Maybe you will try it one day. I am happy to hear my writings can be inspiring :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/8/2017 6:15:00 PM

Very nicely done Heidi...best wishes

Joseph May
Date: 8/8/2017 6:32:00 PM

lol..i like that

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :) I think I should run a challenge for people to 'find the mistakes'. lol

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/8/2017 5:12:00 PM

I looked it up--it's a very complicated form. Kudos for trying the various forms!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 5:15:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. It is challenging at first and then once doing a couple, it gets a little easier, retaining the pattern and rules. Some forms are harder than others. I have been having fun trying new ones lately. I have to be in the mood for the challenge :) I appreciate your support. Have a good evening.

Hannah Borke

Date: 8/8/2017 4:15:00 PM

You did it quite well! (not that I know what that is). We are mates on the new-poems page today; may I please have your view?

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 4:48:00 PM

Thank you Hannah

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/8/2017 3:47:00 PM

I find this form so awkward to write, you made it look so easy Heidi...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 3:48:00 PM

Well, it is a challenge and I also make mistakes too, but fun to learn some new forms lately. Thank you for your comment on this Charlie :)