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Trrifying Ogre

Terrifying Ogre

In memory it is standing still with decrepit stateliness, a crumbling mansion on the hill, in pathetic loneliness. Mama says when she was young it was owned by a rich man and was the nicest house in town. Just picture it if you can. When the Great Depression hit, the rich man lost his money. He jumped from the highest window. “Now, no more questions, Honey.” There were rumors that his widow stayed after her husband died, but no one saw her often. If one called on her, she’d hide. In my childhood the house frightened me, like an ogre on the hill, coming to life at night-time, with emptiness to dispel. It was searching for careless children who dared to get too near. If caught, they were seen no more in their homes or any where. My daddy said it was the wind that made the sound of sighing. My young ears, when I listened hard, could hear a woman crying. By: Joyce Johnson 9/14/11 Won a 2nd For Constance My Dear Heart’s contest “Creepy, Scary, Haunted House Poem, Pleas”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/25/2011 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart Constance's "A Creepy, Scary, Haunted House" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 10:37:00 AM
Wow. I really like this one Joyce. Well done and congratulations
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Date: 9/23/2011 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance, Joyce
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Date: 9/23/2011 12:19:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on an exciting win with this haunting poetry luv...
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Date: 9/23/2011 12:11:00 AM
Wow is the only word that comes to mind for this chilling tale. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 9/22/2011 11:24:00 PM
There is a sound of the south in this. No where did you say 'plantation'. I think it was the Mama and Daddy. Where you from, Joyce? I liked the mood you set here, much. I could envision easily everything you wrote. Congrats on the win, I so enjoyed reading this, Cyndi
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Date: 9/22/2011 7:48:00 PM
Hi Joyce, This is just sweeeet. Sounds like one of the Official Haunted Ohio stories. Remember Crybaby Bridge? That's up near your neck of the woods. Congrats on this super duper scary write. Leave the address so lil kids will stay outta site! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:52:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Joyce. Constance is going to have her hands full with this contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2011 6:19:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..It was a captivating story in poetic form..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest..Sara
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