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tension

rope taut - moving between the ground and skyline, up and down, left and right

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Date: 11/30/2023 4:10:00 PM
Impactful, powerful poem dear Kim . A great Monoku. So much expressed within its few, but strong, lines. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles :):)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Christina!
Date: 11/30/2023 3:41:00 PM
Hi Kim--your Monoku was concise and powerfully conveyed your title, "Tension." I believe it was impactful with compelling language. Nicely done...hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 11/30/2023 7:27:00 AM
Kim. It is imperative for concise poems to possess a lucid and impactful message conveyed through the use of potent language.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2023 12:09:00 PM
Lasaad, how did I do by your definition?
Date: 11/29/2023 8:39:00 PM
Hey, I was checking this site for the last time tonight, checking to see what's new...and came across this. I hope all is okay with you. :) This sounds scary, but well-written.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2023 4:46:00 AM
Thank you for you comments and kindness! <3
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Paige Hind
Date: 11/29/2023 8:57:00 PM
EXCUSE ME- *wouldn't want* :)
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Paige Hind
Date: 11/29/2023 8:56:00 PM
Alright, just checking. ;) Would want you or your poetry to go away! Take care- good luck then!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 8:44:00 PM
For a contest. I guess you felt the tension ;)
Date: 11/29/2023 7:52:00 PM
Hi Kim. Short poems must have a clear message with strong words. You did it. ZIM
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2023 8:45:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!

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