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In the tenderness of twilight, calmness of the air, silently caressed her skin hearts floated like a gentle breeze. Illuminating her persona, naked moon reflected against the softness of her cheeks sweet whispers evoked several senses. Envious stars sparkled, transcending a galaxy of kisses, radiating against her lips and who was I to resist. Her petal lips, sang to me like a lullaby - my heart danced like a butterfly sensual souls serenaded sweet symphonies. Infatuated shadows gazed until sunrise, as embers intensified, embracing Earth's window of wonders a love was born into eternal bliss. I still see that night in her eyes; she always insists it was the stars, but I believe it was the moon. 17 October 2018 Silent One

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2023 12:25:00 PM

Passionate love poem that you have composed in this one. Young love or new love is like floating on air. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/25/2018 6:54:00 AM

I always get tickled when you mention silent in your poems. Love the naked moon reflected against her soft cheeks, stars radiating against her lips, her petal lipped lullaby and the final verse is just so beautiful! The argument of lovers in bliss! I’ve enjoyed reading you today, Silent!

Manu Singh Tanwar

Date: 10/23/2018 12:33:00 PM

wow a beautiful words

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/23/2018 9:19:00 AM

Strangers In The Night is my favourite song by Frank Sinatra.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/23/2018 9:15:00 AM

Hello Silent One, Ah-h-h-h-h! Love!It is a deep feeling for that special someone. Have a nice day my friend.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/22/2018 6:14:00 AM

Astounding beauty, SO:)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/20/2018 8:10:00 PM

sweet ink s-1...last stanza breaks free...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/20/2018 11:09:00 AM

Hi Silent, as always, you use the free verse form to its full extent, laying before us a most creative write. Poetry that shall sing into the heart in its imaginative glory. This is another poetic dream of the soul my friend. Excellence in poetic form. A fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.

Lifes' Tapestry

Date: 10/20/2018 8:47:00 AM

Beautiful

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2018 5:16:00 PM

I can only add to all the wonderful comment here, S.O The poetry, is amazing..

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/19/2018 1:36:00 PM

Dreamy and sweet. This is a lovely testament to the power of a loved one. I loved the kisses of the galaxies line....romantic.

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/18/2018 6:15:00 PM

Beautiful, it is a perfect sway of a moment :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/18/2018 7:17:00 AM

It’s a treat to read your poetic, romantic words again, Silent..I’m trying to get back into writing poetry again. Your Verse inspires! :)

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 10/18/2018 7:14:00 AM

Just do it all over again until y'all figure out who was the blame... the stars or the moon. Romanticly Hot!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 10/17/2018 9:05:00 PM

Who can resist when a beautiful girl is with you on such a romantic night? I absolutely love reading this sensual poem of yours, its rhythm, flow and the contrast with weather makes it an absolute beauty to read, good luck and have a really nice day

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/17/2018 8:11:00 PM

Ahh, the seduction of the ‘naked moon’ is powerful indeed. The beauty of your poem envelopes me in the rich romance and emotions of your exceptional imagery, Silent One. ‘A love was born into eternal bliss’ through the sensual magic of your enticing and endearing verses. Your last stanza is especially exquisite. Superb! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/17/2018 7:30:00 PM

Graceful & sensual writing my Silent friend...love & light...^WW^

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/17/2018 5:30:00 PM

Sensual soft and smooth, just the way I like to red them, thank you for sharing, I believe the title set the pace for the rest of the good poem. Have a great evening S O