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In the tenderness of twilight, calmness of the air, silently caressed her skin hearts floated like a gentle breeze. Illuminating her persona, naked moon reflected against the softness of her cheeks sweet whispers evoked several senses. Envious stars sparkled, transcending a galaxy of kisses, radiating against her lips and who was I to resist. Her petal lips, sang to me like a lullaby - my heart danced like a butterfly sensual souls serenaded sweet symphonies. Infatuated shadows gazed until sunrise, as embers intensified, embracing Earth's window of wonders a love was born into eternal bliss. I still see that night in her eyes; she always insists it was the stars, but I believe it was the moon.
17 October 2018 Silent One

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Date: 10/27/2018 7:47:00 AM
I never thought about it before, S O, but there is definitely something "tender" about twilight.
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Date: 10/25/2018 6:54:00 AM
I always get tickled when you mention silent in your poems. Love the naked moon reflected against her soft cheeks, stars radiating against her lips, her petal lipped lullaby and the final verse is just so beautiful! The argument of lovers in bliss! I’ve enjoyed reading you today, Silent!
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Date: 10/23/2018 12:33:00 PM
wow a beautiful words
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Date: 10/23/2018 9:19:00 AM
Strangers In The Night is my favourite song by Frank Sinatra.
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Date: 10/23/2018 9:15:00 AM
Hello Silent One, Ah-h-h-h-h! Love!It is a deep feeling for that special someone. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/22/2018 6:14:00 AM
Astounding beauty, SO:)
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:10:00 PM
sweet ink s-1...last stanza breaks free...
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Date: 10/20/2018 11:09:00 AM
Hi Silent, as always, you use the free verse form to its full extent, laying before us a most creative write. Poetry that shall sing into the heart in its imaginative glory. This is another poetic dream of the soul my friend. Excellence in poetic form. A fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 10/20/2018 8:47:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 10/19/2018 5:16:00 PM
I can only add to all the wonderful comment here, S.O The poetry, is amazing..
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Date: 10/19/2018 1:36:00 PM
Dreamy and sweet. This is a lovely testament to the power of a loved one. I loved the kisses of the galaxies line....romantic.
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Date: 10/18/2018 6:15:00 PM
Beautiful, it is a perfect sway of a moment :)
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Date: 10/18/2018 7:17:00 AM
It’s a treat to read your poetic, romantic words again, Silent..I’m trying to get back into writing poetry again. Your Verse inspires! :)
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Date: 10/18/2018 7:14:00 AM
Just do it all over again until y'all figure out who was the blame... the stars or the moon. Romanticly Hot!
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Date: 10/17/2018 9:05:00 PM
Who can resist when a beautiful girl is with you on such a romantic night? I absolutely love reading this sensual poem of yours, its rhythm, flow and the contrast with weather makes it an absolute beauty to read, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 10/17/2018 8:11:00 PM
Ahh, the seduction of the ‘naked moon’ is powerful indeed. The beauty of your poem envelopes me in the rich romance and emotions of your exceptional imagery, Silent One. ‘A love was born into eternal bliss’ through the sensual magic of your enticing and endearing verses. Your last stanza is especially exquisite. Superb! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/17/2018 7:30:00 PM
Graceful & sensual writing my Silent friend...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 10/17/2018 5:30:00 PM
Sensual soft and smooth, just the way I like to red them, thank you for sharing, I believe the title set the pace for the rest of the good poem. Have a great evening S O
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Date: 10/17/2018 5:19:00 PM
I was blown away romantically by your beautiful choice of words, Silent One!
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Date: 10/17/2018 5:03:00 PM
Another beautifully romantic masterpiece ...
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Date: 10/17/2018 3:47:00 PM
Loved it from start to finish. Who wouldn't? Well done, S1
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Silent One
Date: 10/17/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thank you my friend.. Glad you liked it..
Date: 10/17/2018 3:45:00 PM
Who better to inspire such lovely lines than the chairman of the board, beautiful Silent One...
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Silent One
Date: 10/17/2018 3:52:00 PM
You call the moon the chairman? lol! Good one! Thanks Charlie..
Date: 10/17/2018 11:48:00 AM
Another love masterpiece, ZZ. Just beautiful and a FAV.
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Silent One
Date: 10/17/2018 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Carole..
Date: 10/17/2018 11:45:00 AM
Soft, sweet and romantic. Your words are beautiful and they move with such elegance and grace along the page. She sounds like a dream. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 10/17/2018 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Brandy.. She is a dream....
Date: 10/17/2018 8:08:00 AM
Swoonworthy gorgeousness, xomo
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Silent One
Date: 10/17/2018 3:42:00 PM
Thanks Mo..
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