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Tenderness of Twilight

In the tenderness of twilight, calmness of the air, silently caressed her skin hearts floated like a gentle breeze. Illuminating her persona, naked moon reflected against the softness of her cheeks sweet whispers evoked several senses. Envious stars sparkled, transcending a galaxy of kisses, radiating against her lips and who was I to resist. Her petal lips, sang to me like a lullaby - my heart danced like a butterfly sensual souls serenaded sweet symphonies. Infatuated shadows gazed until sunrise, as embers intensified, embracing Earth's window of wonders a love was born into eternal bliss. I still see that night in her eyes; she always insists it was the stars, but I believe it was the moon.
17 October 2018 Silent One
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Kendrick Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Passionate love poem that you have composed in this one. Young love or new love is like floating on air. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 6:54 AM
I always get tickled when you mention silent in your poems. Love the naked moon reflected against her soft cheeks, stars radiating against her lips, her petal lipped lullaby and the final verse is just so beautiful! The argument of lovers in bliss! I’ve enjoyed reading you today, Silent!
Tanwar Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 12:33 PM
wow a beautiful words
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Strangers In The Night is my favourite song by Frank Sinatra.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 9:15 AM
Hello Silent One, Ah-h-h-h-h! Love!It is a deep feeling for that special someone. Have a nice day my friend.
Daniel Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 6:14 AM
Astounding beauty, SO:)
Goff Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 8:10 PM
sweet ink s-1...last stanza breaks free...
Raven Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Hi Silent, as always, you use the free verse form to its full extent, laying before us a most creative write. Poetry that shall sing into the heart in its imaginative glory. This is another poetic dream of the soul my friend. Excellence in poetic form. A fave. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
Tapestry Avatar
October 20, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Beautiful
Horsman Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 5:16 PM
I can only add to all the wonderful comment here, S.O The poetry, is amazing..
Manassian Avatar
October 19, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Dreamy and sweet. This is a lovely testament to the power of a loved one. I loved the kisses of the galaxies line....romantic.
Nance Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Beautiful, it is a perfect sway of a moment :)
Leiser Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 7:17 AM
It’s a treat to read your poetic, romantic words again, Silent..I’m trying to get back into writing poetry again. Your Verse inspires! :)
Papyrus Avatar
October 18, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Just do it all over again until y'all figure out who was the blame... the stars or the moon. Romanticly Hot!
Ajmal Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 9:05 PM
Who can resist when a beautiful girl is with you on such a romantic night? I absolutely love reading this sensual poem of yours, its rhythm, flow and the contrast with weather makes it an absolute beauty to read, good luck and have a really nice day
Ashley Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 8:11 PM
Ahh, the seduction of the ‘naked moon’ is powerful indeed. The beauty of your poem envelopes me in the rich romance and emotions of your exceptional imagery, Silent One. ‘A love was born into eternal bliss’ through the sensual magic of your enticing and endearing verses. Your last stanza is especially exquisite. Superb! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Warrior Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Graceful & sensual writing my Silent friend...love & light...^WW^
Rose  Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Sensual soft and smooth, just the way I like to red them, thank you for sharing, I believe the title set the pace for the rest of the good poem. Have a great evening S O
Sergi Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 5:19 PM
I was blown away romantically by your beautiful choice of words, Silent One!
S     Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 5:03 PM
Another beautifully romantic masterpiece ...
Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Loved it from start to finish. Who wouldn't? Well done, S1
One Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Thank you my friend.. Glad you liked it..
Smith Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Who better to inspire such lovely lines than the chairman of the board, beautiful Silent One...
One Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:52 PM
You call the moon the chairman? lol! Good one! Thanks Charlie..
Duet Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 11:48 AM
Another love masterpiece, ZZ. Just beautiful and a FAV.
One Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thank you Carole..
Nicole Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Soft, sweet and romantic. Your words are beautiful and they move with such elegance and grace along the page. She sounds like a dream. ~ Brandy
One Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:41 PM
Thank you Brandy.. She is a dream....
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 8:08 AM
Swoonworthy gorgeousness, xomo
One Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 3:42 PM
Thanks Mo..
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