Tenderness of Night

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tower’s gold lanterns stroke warm sheen on war-torn rocks… peace wraps pastel night
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Brown Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations Nette, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol
Ruebel Avatar
February 28, 2011 at 9:34 AM
Hello Nette, This is just so beautiful, Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Beautiful job, Nette great to see you near the top! Congratulations on your worthy poems 6th place honored win! Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Konos Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 2:36 PM
It could have been a book chapter that's how well it's written stoking the imagination never to cease.....Thank You ....
Taylor Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 12:54 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Nette. Nice going. xxxRalph
Poet Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 11:38 AM
Excellent write nette!The last line is so wonderful!Congrats~~kashinath
Richards Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 8:35 AM
This gives such a romantic view of the haunting picture, a completly change of thought. Nicely done, Nette~!!
K. Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 8:26 AM
coming back here to say Congrats! you sure are winning a lot these days, yay for you ;) hugs :)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Congrats Nette my friend on another wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write luv.. so happy to be sharing 6th place with one of the very best.. and oh.. I collect Angels ..have about 3000 throughout my home inside and out... u would just luv..luv..
Mannan Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 3:15 AM
A pastel thought indeed.many warm congrats for this success.
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 11:23 PM
Congratulations, nette. I see you a lot here too!!
Johnson Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 9:51 PM
Very pretty scene. Congratulaions on your win. Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
February 26, 2011 at 8:51 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win in my contest, Nette. Thanks for your support. Always, Annalise
La France Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 12:31 PM
This haiku has such a peacefullness to it, very beautiful, now you asked me to let you know when my Ballade was complete, I worked on it all day an it is ready for the unveiling~~
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:57 AM
You did a symbolic one. Very nicely done, Nette!
George   Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Lovely image in this beautiful Haiku, Nette. Lainie
Falotico Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 4:48 AM
Now this a great poetry Nette my dear... wow, your images lift from the page!!! best of luck with this winner...love Michael
K. Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 12:47 AM
such an uplifting take on the photo, Nette-- your last line is just so soothing, enjoyed that pastel night ;) hugs!
Loving Iii Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 5:17 PM
only war can teach the real meaning of peace. john
Mehta Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 4:30 PM
Very unique way to read the picture poetically, nette. I shall be sending two different lines in place of the last two.
Poet Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Wow nette!What a wonderful Haiku is this one!goodluck in the contest---kashinath PS:(Read my KASH poem):
Fraser Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Good luck in Annalise's contest Nette. The majestic beam of saviours light, the lighthouse.....:)
Sweetheart Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 9:01 AM
Lovely vision painted in wonderful words of Haiku Nette my friend... a lilting lingering presence of the photo .. good luck in the new contest by Annalise.. she will simply luv this being such a sweet soul herself...luv..
Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 4:27 AM
Good one that reads like a winner to me..Middle line very creative...Good luck..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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