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Tenderness of Night

,,,,,,,,,,,...,,,,,,,,,, tower’s gold lanterns stroke warm sheen on war-torn rocks… peace wraps pastel night ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, (( for Annalise Brigham " What MY Eyes See" Contest ))

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/28/2011 11:00:00 AM

Congratulations Nette, on your well deserved win in the contest " What My Eyes See" sponsored by Annalise Brigham. Love, Carol

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/28/2011 9:34:00 AM

Hello Nette, This is just so beautiful, Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar

John Freeman

Date: 2/27/2011 4:05:00 PM

Beautiful job, Nette great to see you near the top! Congratulations on your worthy poems 6th place honored win! Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/27/2011 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Judy Konos

Date: 2/27/2011 2:36:00 PM

It could have been a book chapter that's how well it's written stoking the imagination never to cease.....Thank You ....

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/27/2011 12:54:00 PM

Congrats on a well deserved win, Nette. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 11:38:00 AM

Excellent write nette!The last line is so wonderful!Congrats~~kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/27/2011 8:35:00 AM

This gives such a romantic view of the haunting picture, a completly change of thought. Nicely done, Nette~!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/27/2011 8:26:00 AM

coming back here to say Congrats! you sure are winning a lot these days, yay for you ;) hugs :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 7:32:00 AM

Congrats Nette my friend on another wonderful win in the Haiku contest with another fabulous write luv.. so happy to be sharing 6th place with one of the very best.. and oh.. I collect Angels ..have about 3000 throughout my home inside and out... u would just luv..luv..

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/27/2011 3:15:00 AM

A pastel thought indeed.many warm congrats for this success.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2011 11:23:00 PM

Congratulations, nette. I see you a lot here too!!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/26/2011 9:51:00 PM

Very pretty scene. Congratulaions on your win. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2011 8:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your very fine win in my contest, Nette. Thanks for your support. Always, Annalise

Constance La France

Date: 2/25/2011 12:31:00 PM

This haiku has such a peacefullness to it, very beautiful, now you asked me to let you know when my Ballade was complete, I worked on it all day an it is ready for the unveiling~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2011 10:57:00 AM

You did a symbolic one. Very nicely done, Nette!

Elaine George

Date: 2/25/2011 8:31:00 AM

Lovely image in this beautiful Haiku, Nette. Lainie

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/25/2011 4:48:00 AM

Now this a great poetry Nette my dear... wow, your images lift from the page!!! best of luck with this winner...love Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/25/2011 12:47:00 AM

such an uplifting take on the photo, Nette-- your last line is just so soothing, enjoyed that pastel night ;) hugs!

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/24/2011 5:17:00 PM

only war can teach the real meaning of peace. john

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/24/2011 4:30:00 PM

Very unique way to read the picture poetically, nette. I shall be sending two different lines in place of the last two.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2011 1:28:00 PM

Wow nette!What a wonderful Haiku is this one!goodluck in the contest---kashinath PS:(Read my KASH poem):

James Fraser

Date: 2/24/2011 11:56:00 AM

Good luck in Annalise's contest Nette. The majestic beam of saviours light, the lighthouse.....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2011 9:01:00 AM

Lovely vision painted in wonderful words of Haiku Nette my friend... a lilting lingering presence of the photo .. good luck in the new contest by Annalise.. she will simply luv this being such a sweet soul herself...luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2011 4:27:00 AM

Good one that reads like a winner to me..Middle line very creative...Good luck..Thanks for stopping by...Sara