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Tenderly I Touch

. Tenderly I touched you with whispers from my lips Entering the depths Of your heart so I wished And suddenly you Kissed me as my wish subsists and earth spins and the soles of my feet supplicate yes to make humble request for the lodge yes to come to rest and firmly stick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/11/2013 11:57:00 PM
This is a sweet and romantic write. The reader can feel your passion and devotion Nice job
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Date: 6/7/2009 1:21:00 PM
Who could resist? Sweet words like this?... (ps...thank you for all your kind comments on my poetry this morning! A day brightener, I do appreciate your kind words!:)
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Date: 6/4/2009 11:02:00 PM
wowwww---superb
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Date: 6/4/2009 6:50:00 AM
Now this is a masterpiece ... the opening line sets the pace and never lets up ... totally ahead of the race
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