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Tender Hush of a Whisper

“i say to you in a tender hush as you gently close your eyes, uttering under my breath to make you finally realize... i love you to the lowest demise, up to the highest skies.” i crave your very existence, am enticed by your unyielding touch- perpetually bound to your side with honor, never needing anything else to survive. forget me not if i wither away into eventide’s silhouette, for tonight i shan’t forget- you’re why the sun set. fear not what lies ahead, my beloved- for i am but a woman longing to be near you without anger. i fall onto my aching knees… with you all my pain does cease- for you bring me such passionate ease. i shall bathe myself in your eternal regard for my undying affection- you shall lather your soul in a cascade of our never ending connection. for i am free in you.... (I chose this one out of the last month) Most Comments Received in 2018 Contest July Morning July 24, 2018

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Date: 8/12/2018 6:45:00 PM
Fantastic romantic verse with great imagery , Laura , congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/24/2018 3:32:00 AM
thank you sweet eve :)-luloo
Date: 8/11/2018 8:55:00 PM
Back to congratulate you again for your win. Well done!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/24/2018 3:32:00 AM
thank you again! :)-luloo
Date: 8/10/2018 2:16:00 PM
Laura congratulations on your win with this amazing write!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/24/2018 3:32:00 AM
many thanks dear heart :)-luloo
Date: 8/9/2018 10:01:00 PM
Laura, your poem is a beautifully expressed exquisite romance.. Congratulations on your excellent win! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/24/2018 3:32:00 AM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 8/9/2018 9:31:00 PM
Luloo, congrats on your win for this beautiful romantic poem. John
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/24/2018 3:31:00 AM
thank you dear John :)-luloo
Date: 7/31/2018 3:44:00 PM
Lovely, Laura. Congrats on your top win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/24/2018 3:31:00 AM
thank you sweet lady! :)-lulooo
Date: 7/28/2018 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. So beautiful, romantic. Well done!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/29/2018 10:45:00 AM
many thanks lovely Susan! :)-luloo
Date: 7/28/2018 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Laura, I enjoyed reading this beautiful piece.. . Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/29/2018 10:45:00 AM
thank you sweetest lady :)-luloo
Date: 7/26/2018 5:42:00 AM
Laura, you write romance as if you were her creator.. so lovely is your soft paint brush!
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/26/2018 6:45:00 AM
aww thank you! :) -luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 7/26/2018 6:45:00 AM
aww thank you! :) -luloo

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