Tender Hush of a Whisper
“i say to you in a tender hush
as you gently close your eyes,
uttering under my breath to
make you finally realize...
i love you to the lowest demise,
up to the highest skies.”
i crave your very existence,
am enticed by your unyielding touch-
perpetually bound to your side with honor,
never needing anything else to survive.
forget me not if i wither away into eventide’s
silhouette,
for tonight i shan’t forget-
you’re why the sun set.
fear not what lies ahead, my beloved-
for i am but a woman longing to be near
you without anger.
i fall onto my aching knees…
with you all my pain does cease-
for you bring me such passionate ease.
i shall bathe myself in your eternal
regard for my undying affection-
you shall lather your soul in a cascade
of our never ending connection.
for i am free in you....
(I chose this one out of the last month)
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