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Tender Coffee

<>my first taste of coffee - his breath. not sweet, not unpleasant, merely my first.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/20/2016 6:32:00 AM
Very nice. It actually seems to say quite a bit.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2016 6:52:00 AM
Thank you, Michael!
Date: 12/19/2016 11:25:00 PM
It took me a minute but then I got it, an intimate moment that only lovers know. Nicely done Ms. Rodrigues.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2016 6:51:00 AM
Thank you, David! If my poem, being short, made you have to work at a conclusion, then i guess it worked!
Date: 12/19/2016 12:04:00 PM
So nice--an everyday occurrence that says so much, yet leaves much unsaid. Clever. Thanks, Dave
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2016 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, David! :)

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