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Ten Little Indians

You perfected your lies to an art. You succeeded in breaking my heart. I shed not one tear, for the hour is near, when arsenic will keep us apart.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/27/2010 5:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Gerard. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 12/27/2010 6:39:00 AM

Gerard, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/27/2010 5:47:00 AM

Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. No punches pulled in this one. Eamon

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2010 11:47:00 PM

Gerard, this here is one of my favorites in the contest. Congratulations on a very well metered and funny limerick. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/26/2010 5:03:00 PM

Congrats Gerard on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy with luv... fingers crossed for my GIANTS luv...Happy New Year too..

John Freeman

Date: 12/26/2010 9:41:00 AM

You perfected your lies to an art. This covers a lot of ground in this day for a lot of the human fault, Gerard. Good Job. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 12/26/2010 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations Gerard on your worthy poem's honored place, Agape, Moses

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/26/2010 6:36:00 AM

Congrats, Gerard, on your win in the contest with this one! Dan C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/26/2010 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/26/2010 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Gerard

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2010 11:12:00 PM

GERARD, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

John Freeman

Date: 12/11/2010 6:49:00 PM

Oh a biting satire here, Gerard.She's going to be sorry.Your poems made me laugh out loud! hahaha, A very, very good one!! agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/4/2010 10:14:00 AM

Oh, oh. She's going to be sorry. Good one. Thanks for commenting on my poetry. Love, Joyce

Diane Locksley

Date: 12/4/2010 7:28:00 AM

Ha-ha! Your poem made me laugh out loud! Good luck in the Indian giver contest.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/3/2010 8:13:00 AM

Biting satire here, Gerard. If you know someone going through this, hide the arsenic! Please give my best wishes to Susan for a wonderful holiday together. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2010 8:19:00 PM

hahaha, Good one!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 5:54:00 PM

hello, Gerard stopping by to say,, and thanks to all, smiles to your entry,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 5:13:00 PM

Wow Gerard.. I wrote about luv too.. great minds DO think alike luv.. and I am so with u on these upcoming football games..especially Monday night...good luck with the contest entry and good luck with Lambeau this week too.. hoping my GIANTS can stay on top after those boo birds lose tonight... thinking positive now..luv.. haha..