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You tempt me As I sense your presence by my side The whisper of your flowing silken dress A whiff of fragrant jasmine scent. You tempt me With each flicker of your doe-brown eyes Shadowed in lilac hues and full dark lashes A smile, partly concealed on pouting lips. You tempt me With curvaceous waves of long black hair Cascading by glowing peach-rose cheeks Rising, falling on your breast with every breath. You tempt me As you stand against the evening light The Aphrodite of my dreams and fantasies Seductive, alluring and desirable. I temp you As gently I pull back my straying hair Nestled on the fullness of my breast Exposing what your famished eyes are feasting on. I tempt you In silent expectation my body glows With purpose of fulfilment I slowly make my way to you My haloed shadow dances on your rigid form. I tempt you Breathless, you lean against the wall My desires surging at this sign of weakness Within inches of your body, I languidly pause. I tempt you Sensuously, at satin ribbons my fingers pull Until my struggling gown hesitantly quivers Before it glides and gathers at my feet. I tempt you Grounded by wanton cravings, I look you in the eyes I simply smoulder there within your reach The final vestige of abstinence still lingers in the air. I tempt you Then I lean in, my breath is warm upon your check Against your heaving chest my breasts now brush I breathe and whisper softly “Come to me.” I tempt you Inveigled in this rare moment, my heart bursts As you crush my body tightly against yours You taste the temptress kiss that frees your needs. I tempt you For my heart has long been tempted By strong unquenched desires For you. A collaboration between Paul Callus and Appassionata (Paul's name for me)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/31/2015 3:29:00 PM
brb have to go to the WOW bank and make a withdrawal! OK there we are Wow wow wow yet again!!! What a joy to read these sensual beautiful poems over the holidays!!
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Date: 1/29/2015 3:34:00 PM
You only needed to post a picture of yourself my lovely friend!!!!!!!!!!!!! Simply sensational passionate sensual I LOVE it - awesome write Eileen and Paul:-) 7 of course:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/29/2015 8:37:00 AM
A man who is strong who allows himself weakness will then experience the heights of ecstasy! You two have written a passionate masterpiece. Two ooh la las and a ta da!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2015 10:44:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. I was really glad when Paul send me a few stanzas a few days ago. :) This is our second collab and both on themes of passion and love...My favorites! You exuberant reaction is a thrill.
Date: 1/29/2015 5:23:00 AM
If temptation has such a poetic outcome I will never say again : "Lead not us into temptation.." Superb writing dear Eileen and dear Paul, a seven to each!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2015 10:46:00 AM
Oh my dear poet....You bring a smile. Of course....this is literary liberty. Issues of morality are different in the light of the WORD. ;) Thank you for your wonderful visit. I love having you here. If you don't come....It disappoints me bitterly. Hugs
Date: 1/29/2015 5:12:00 AM
Splendid erotic collaboration Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2015 10:47:00 AM
My kind of poem! ;) Thanks
Date: 1/29/2015 1:13:00 AM
"A smile, partly concealed on pouting lips..." Paul truly knows the vicissitudes of a Temptress' temper, and her controlled countenance. Eileen, you know indeed how to squeeze a man's desires into submission, into frenzy! "Breathless,you lean against the wall...In silent expectation my body glows..." glow it must, for you are in the glory of passion. There is awesome contrast in this poem that culminates in rich reward. Another inspiring collaboration Eileen...J.A.B.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2015 1:18:00 AM
OH....SUBMISSION!!! YES YES YES! Justin...there is a sweetness that comes when you know...a strong man is weak in your presence. There is no feeling like it...I started a novel when I was 14 or 15...A Broken Man. Oh...in my mind it's already a movie and has won many Oscars! ;) It shows how the love of a woman can totally devastate a man...It's...beautiful. I wish I could finish it. I would have liked to write...pulsates, but...Paul came up with glows...and it works nicely! :) I'm afraid some of my lines were a little too raw and needed some polishing. I'm happy with the outcome. Paul send me the first few stanzas and the rest....with some modifications....is history! :) Thanks for visiting, my dear. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 1/28/2015 6:11:00 PM
What a great piece of writing by you two. So sensual and filled with desire. Truely the poem lives up to it's title. Your writing is just as steamy as Pablo Neruda. Brilliant work. 7 and into favs. love shane xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2015 10:48:00 AM
What a compliment, Shane...I must tell that to my sister-in-law who is a Neruda fan. Thanks for the high praise.
Date: 1/28/2015 4:25:00 PM
This is smoking hot . . . I just broke out in sweat . . . you captured the desperate need to consummate love -- such heat in every word . . . outstanding job you two . . . I admire both of you immensely! 7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2015 10:42:00 AM
:) I admire you, David....If you broke out into a sweat...I can say of the write...Mission...ACCOMPLISHED! Hugs
Date: 1/28/2015 3:08:00 PM
Hi dear Eileen! Thank you for once again collaborating with me; it has been a pleasure! You are understanding and easy to work with:) Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/28/2015 3:36:00 PM
As for the pics....staying within PS rules!!! Oh...I could have had some good ones for this one!!! Love looking for pics...It's half the fun!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/28/2015 3:20:00 PM
Paul...thanks for asking. I'm touched beyond measure. I'm glad you chose what you thought would make me happy...You were right! Thanks for making it smoother and sweeter...You have finesse in your writing. I like that soft touch too. Everything has a time and place... :) Hugs
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/28/2015 3:09:00 PM
Ohhhh and I love your pictures:)

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