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Temporal Serenade

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ a melody of seconds hum, time's symphony, it strums in harmony, we play our part, each moment etched upon the heart

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Jay Narain

Date: 4/3/2024 3:22:00 PM

Great one

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 5:43:00 PM

thank you, Jay. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 4/3/2024 7:40:00 AM

Time is usually the maestro in our lives. Too little... not enough, but it's harmony that we reach for. Sometimes we don't play the right note, but the symphonies we write remain on the heart. Loved that line, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 5:43:00 PM

your comments were lovely and poetic. Thank you for your words--they are insightful and wise. Color me grateful for your visit. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/3/2024 4:26:00 AM

Ahhh!! If only, we could live in harmony. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 5:41:00 PM

thanks, Sara K, for your visit and for your comments. Have a blessed evening, hugs Sara B

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/2/2024 9:22:00 PM

Harmony us what we are all looking for. Thank you for this joyful poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:20:00 AM

I agree...we all instinctively seek harmony and balance. Well said & wise, dear Hilda. Have a pleasant day, hugs, Sara

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/2/2024 7:06:00 PM

This is beautiful, thanks for sharing your wonderful gift with us all: )

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:21:00 AM

awww, thank you, Stephan, for your visit and for such uplfiting and encouraging words. Color me grateful! Enjoy your day, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/2/2024 6:58:00 PM

The passage of time and the significance of every moment in shaping our lives are comparable to a symphony, dearest Sara. Each second contributes to creating a beautiful melody, evoking musical imagery that describes time as a harmonious symphony. The choice of lyrical and rhythmic syntax enhances the poem's musical theme, while words like "melody," "symphony," and "strums" further emphasize the sense of harmony and rhythm.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:23:00 AM

I take delight in reading your comments, for they're both insightful and encouraging. I'm grateful for your in depth read beyond the words into the subtleties of a poems creation. You consistently see the 'layers.' Thank you for your visit. Wishing you a pleasant week, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Joseph May

Date: 4/2/2024 6:51:00 PM

I like how you described time a melody, We are all musicians in its orchestra, Wonderful write

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:20:00 AM

thank you, Joseph, for your uplifting comments. I liked 'we are all musicians in its orchestra--well said. Have a pleasant day, Sara