Temples of Battle

Do you dare present me your Indigent heart, and presume it worthy? 
Do you imagine you may claim my crown through Obtuse eyes?
You walk upon this land I have won, disgracing the temples of battle 
Which the memory of my lost soldiers Consecrate,
As you, in youth's Delirium, daydream of thrones and trophies, 
My teeth have tasted the blood of Awakening giants.
Your Delicate unranked bone and sinew can not combat
The Egregious climb of time that looms and shadows.
In your folly, you naively expect to Mediate defeat,
But here, there is no counsel for the conquered.

8/23/19

For 'Eight Word Challenge 9' contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

required words: Indigent, Obtuse, Egregious, Delirium, Delicate, Consecrate, Mediate, Awakening.
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Hamilton Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 10:29 AM
Congrats Michelle for placing in my contest, so many great lines in this piece, eg unranked bone and sinew!
Lane Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 4:54 AM
Time is one of the most egregious foes mankind must tolerate. Well written, Michelle.
Chiri Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 1:01 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest!;)
Krutsinger Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 3:01 PM
"daydream of thrones and trophies, My teeth have tasted the blood of Awakening giants." - this is so what I feel sometimes!
Proxenos Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 1:17 PM
A wonderful, well presented and absolutely destined for a win poem. Your talent is so evident Michelle, best wishes and hugs, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 7:09 PM
wow, this is very classy and strong words too. I did not have a clue how to use his words in free verse but you sure pulled it off!!
Faulkner Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 10:53 PM
I was inspired by the lion in 'The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe' for this one, thank you for your comment, Andrea.
Kiser Avatar
August 27, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Quite powerful, strong words; best of luck in the contest.
Faulkner Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 10:51 PM
Thank you, appreciate your comment-
Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2019 at 3:58 PM
If you haven't made yourself perfectly clear to the object of your indignation, I pity his end! Nice entry for the contest, Michelle! :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Thanks, gw, I think I was in an imperious mood when I wrote it!
Rose  Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 6:06 AM
Strong bold and beautiful is your poetry Michell, wishing you a winning wish, with frosting too xo
Faulkner Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Yumm, frosting too! Thank you for your comment!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 24, 2019 at 8:55 PM
You did splendid job on your entry Michelle. This lets your talent shine! : ) xxoo
Faulkner Avatar
August 25, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Thanks for your kind comment, Connie.
Cholt Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 6:20 PM
Great poem. I think this might be the winner. Best wishes for the contest.
Faulkner Avatar
August 23, 2019 at 11:02 PM
Appreciate your comment, thank you.
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