Temples of Battle

Do you dare present me your Indigent heart, and presume it worthy? 
Do you imagine you may claim my crown through Obtuse eyes?
You walk upon this land I have won, disgracing the temples of battle 
Which the memory of my lost soldiers Consecrate,
As you, in youth's Delirium, daydream of thrones and trophies, 
My teeth have tasted the blood of Awakening giants.
Your Delicate unranked bone and sinew can not combat
The Egregious climb of time that looms and shadows.
In your folly, you naively expect to Mediate defeat,
But here, there is no counsel for the conquered.

8/23/19

For 'Eight Word Challenge 9' contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton

required words: Indigent, Obtuse, Egregious, Delirium, Delicate, Consecrate, Mediate, Awakening.

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Date: 9/12/2019 10:29:00 AM
Congrats Michelle for placing in my contest, so many great lines in this piece, eg unranked bone and sinew!
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Date: 9/12/2019 4:54:00 AM
Time is one of the most egregious foes mankind must tolerate. Well written, Michelle.
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Date: 9/12/2019 1:01:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest!;)
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Date: 9/11/2019 3:01:00 PM
"daydream of thrones and trophies, My teeth have tasted the blood of Awakening giants." - this is so what I feel sometimes!
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Date: 8/30/2019 1:17:00 PM
A wonderful, well presented and absolutely destined for a win poem. Your talent is so evident Michelle, best wishes and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/29/2019 7:09:00 PM
wow, this is very classy and strong words too. I did not have a clue how to use his words in free verse but you sure pulled it off!!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/29/2019 10:53:00 PM
I was inspired by the lion in 'The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe' for this one, thank you for your comment, Andrea.
Date: 8/27/2019 3:55:00 PM
Quite powerful, strong words; best of luck in the contest.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/29/2019 10:51:00 PM
Thank you, appreciate your comment-
Date: 8/26/2019 3:58:00 PM
If you haven't made yourself perfectly clear to the object of your indignation, I pity his end! Nice entry for the contest, Michelle! :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/29/2019 10:49:00 PM
Thanks, gw, I think I was in an imperious mood when I wrote it!
Date: 8/25/2019 6:06:00 AM
Strong bold and beautiful is your poetry Michell, wishing you a winning wish, with frosting too xo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/25/2019 2:40:00 PM
Yumm, frosting too! Thank you for your comment!
Date: 8/24/2019 8:55:00 PM
You did splendid job on your entry Michelle. This lets your talent shine! : ) xxoo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/25/2019 2:40:00 PM
Thanks for your kind comment, Connie.
Date: 8/23/2019 6:20:00 PM
Great poem. I think this might be the winner. Best wishes for the contest.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 8/23/2019 11:02:00 PM
Appreciate your comment, thank you.
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