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Telling Time

My hands are always working, turning to the right My voice chimes out loudly certain times of the day I strike powerfully and proudly at midnight I am often referred to as a great Father, even grand I stand tall with a solid body and heavy weights You must help me run smooth and use my key I most likely will survive decades and centuries but I may slow and need some work and tuning In return I will always be dependable, a friend for all time

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Date: 1/19/2021 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations Tania on your winning poem. Clear poetical description to be remembered in Time!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/20/2021 2:59:00 AM
Thank you Frances!
Date: 6/18/2020 6:31:00 PM
Awesome personification, Tania:-) Enjoyed!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/19/2020 5:34:00 AM
Thank you Ed!
Date: 6/15/2020 6:29:00 PM
Hello Tania … a grandfather clock would have so many grand old tales hidden behind the constant tick-tock and chimes. A nice verse in old grandfather's perspective - thank you Tania - Lindsay
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/15/2020 6:48:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay!
Date: 6/15/2020 3:51:00 AM
If I had a manor house a grandfather clock in the hallway would be the first thing I'd get. Like a sentry at your front door. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/15/2020 2:02:00 PM
Thanks Tom, I love grandfather clocks and have a few.
Date: 6/14/2020 9:38:00 PM
I have always adored a grandfather clock. Great personification Tania.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/15/2020 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Caren!
Date: 6/14/2020 6:24:00 PM
what superb personification Tania - we have a tiny grandmother clock nothing as grand as the one in your poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/14/2020 8:43:00 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs

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