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Teeming Thunder

I heard your thunder… It trembled the world with fear Future’s mighty blur Your teeming thunder Fulfills sudden, minute glimpse Dare to wonder? Sure… My team’s self-esteem Got ruined that same instant We saw your swift gleam And… right this instant, It strikes me that you’re vibrant Beyond brilliant!!! You, the strong weather, Made the world effortlessly… Spin like no other!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/18/2016 9:02:00 PM
I agree with everything Silent One has stated just below.
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