Teddy Bears

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Two teddy bears stock photo. Image of isolated, cute - 38658434

I think I lost my teddy bear.
He’ll do anything on a dare.
His brother is thin.
He’s his younger twin.
They probably went to the fair.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2025 4:43:00 PM

Hopefully they weren’t captured for prizes!

Bill Baker
Date: 8/15/2025 9:25:00 PM

As cute as they are, they had no problem find lots of friends. Smiles ~ Blessing my friend. Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/15/2025 4:35:00 PM

Well, if they went to the Texas State Fair, they'll enjoy those monstrous, Texas-sized funnel cakes...neither of them will be thin then :-) Humorous Limerick, Bill Enjoyed it, hugs, Sara

Bill Baker
Date: 8/15/2025 9:27:00 PM

They told me they like to watch the crazy people get on those monster rides ... especially that giant wheel with seats that goes to infinity and back. Whoa! Love ya, Bill