Teddy Bear

i just want to be a sweet talking teddy bear inside golden honey drops in dripping feelings upon the softest of emotions buttering you up so we can sandwich together sweetly tickling the taste buds sparkling roses blooming beautiful crowned queen of the deep ocean softly rainbow colouring one's soul as waves unfold out whispering in winds a tune played upon the deepest organ

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/21/2013 10:16:00 AM

WOW! you are some kind of Teddy Bear. I collect Teddy Bears. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/20/2013 3:22:00 PM

awhh, you really groove, liam... catch me, my hear is melting!.. charming read all the way!..:) huggs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/20/2013 2:45:00 PM

I love your line, "a tune played upon the deepest organ". This is a very romantic and heartwarming poem, Liam. This would be perfect for Valentine's Day. Beautiful writing!...Thank you very much for the nice comments.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/20/2013 9:19:00 AM

Teddy bears are a girl s best friend..Sweet and cuddly poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/20/2013 9:08:00 AM

- I love Teddy Bears & your sweet, beautiful and romantic poems, Liam .... - Always nice to read!! - Have a great Sunday! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)