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Technology and a Broken Heart

A rag of a paper from a lifetime that's gone, Replaced by a small microchip. The feel of those words in the palm of your hands, That the ends of your fingers would grip. And the hands of a surgeon juggling his craft, Or the journalist reporting the news. All replaced with perfect mechanical arms, On an internet with millions of views. Already we yearn for the art of the human, Who'd do the best that he could with few fails. Spinning their yarn with small human insights, And yet covering all important details. And the car indicator you pushed to turn off, Or the window you wound to pull down. We miss the old life of being involved, When computers didn't run the whole town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/24/2018 12:26:00 PM
hi Lewis you have truly said about the technology ..it has driven away from reality and made our hearts think like machines ,,,,there are no more feelings of love, repsect and regard . all because of machines..............thanks i like your idea of writing about this
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Date: 7/26/2016 4:16:00 PM
I still have roll down windows on my car lol. but i know what you mean, I do so much of my art on the computer with my photography, but the last couple days I've been sketching and painting and it just feels good to get hands dirty, you know. keep making art with your hands my friend u r amazing.
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Date: 7/26/2016 1:49:00 PM
Daily. Several times a day. Great write.
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Date: 7/26/2016 8:26:00 AM
This piece somehow engage a double Understanding of the phenomena A truly revealing poem Nice
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Date: 7/26/2016 6:36:00 AM
Wow, Lewis... I love the first line... reads like a true metaphor. Clever write...skat
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Date: 7/26/2016 6:35:00 AM
Computer apocalypse foretold. Not too far off before the sci-fi scenarious turn to reality and everything, but everything, gets taken care of by computers which will do our thinking and even repair/upgrade themselves while we end up as blatheringidiots, probably taken care of by computers. Or maybe they will program us. Scary! Well written, Lewis, loved it. ~karam~
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Date: 7/26/2016 5:37:00 AM
Well thought out and enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 7/26/2016 5:30:00 AM
Even with eyes on tomorrow we love looking at the last train ... Nicely written ...
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