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Written for the Psychedelic contest sponsored by Kai M N. An imaginary take, putting myself through an intoxicated journey of undying love.

The forest is where trees nestle and mushrooms sigh, spinning electric dreams from harlequin vines and multicolored roses… Tonight, ink flows in a hypnotic trance, my thoughts swirl through the holographic ethereality, like a pixie fairy ~ moon-walking, above the psychedelic wilderness, engrossed in kaleidoscopic dews, chasing origami butterflies, tied to the phoenix crescent, where I see your midnight eyes blinking like fervent fireflies, as the air serenades an enticing anthem, luring me to a sky sequined with swirling amulets, emanating secrets like rainbow raindrops upon spring-soaked meadows of neon sprinkles. I ponder, will you find me amidst the lilac haze to paint my skin with a fluorescent fragrance~ and scribble initials in aurora acrylic, as this heart keeps pacing, awaiting a tulip sunrise while galaxies outline the saffron rings with unicorn dust, touching intricate layers of silence adorned with wishful wisterias? Perhaps this is what Alice chased through the rabbit hole, a violet vortex of undying love, that lingers in lucid shades of mosaic melodies, for in the midst of spiraling vibrance, my soul remains entwined with the flickering flames of your lunar silhouette, as colors of constellations choreograph this theatrical romance… So let me close the windows of my consciousness like a sojourner sailing through seas of musical serenity, forever forgotten~ tripping in the aesthetic warmth of your pulsating arms.

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Date: 12/7/2024 7:13:00 PM
Dear Empress, soulful poetess, I adore the wet prismatic imagery of your verse like "kaleidoscopic dews" and "rainbow raindrops" and "neon sprinkles". Of course "unicorn dust" would be prismatic to me as well. Your rich imagery and creative metaphors enthralls my emotions and imagination, as always. Congratulations for your sweet success in Kai's contest. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/7/2024 11:32:00 AM
Wonderful. Congratulations on your win. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 12/4/2024 9:21:00 PM
congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 12/2/2024 4:24:00 PM
Cool poem! - poor sighing mushrooms...chasing origami butterflies sounds fun. I like midnight eyes, blinking like butterflies.
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Date: 12/1/2024 7:38:00 PM
Is this one for that psychedelic contest? Wow it fits that theme fantastically, rabbit hole and all!!
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Date: 12/1/2024 4:41:00 AM
The portrayal of love here is indeed breathtaking and it has assumed the dimension of a magical fantasy. It makes you feel like you are walking in the air with the lunar crescent above you. "Tonight, ink flows in a hypnotic trance, my thoughts swirl through the holographic ethereality, like a pixie fairy ~ moon-walking, above the psychedelic wilderness," Wow.... so beautiful and ethereal. It has a dream like quality and I feel myself lost in an enchanted forest with kaleidoscopic dews and origami butterflies. You are so engrossed with his silhouette and you see his eyes blinking like fireflies. What unmatched descriptions! Into my FAVE.
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Date: 12/1/2024 4:03:00 AM
Dear Ink, so happy to see you back my dear. Trust all is well? Your poem is utterly mesmerizing—a dreamlike fusion of nature, love, and surrealism. Your vivid imagery, from the lilac haze to the tulip sunrise, paints a world of tender longing and magical wonder. It flows like a living painting, pulsing with beauty and emotion. Truly breathtaking...Love and Hugs
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Date: 11/30/2024 1:39:00 PM
‘ emanating secrets like rainbow raindrops’… oh those rainbow raindrops!!! Exquisite poem, as always. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:28:00 AM
Thank you so much dear robert i appreciate you dropping by always and always for being so supportive
Date: 11/30/2024 12:21:00 PM
Beautiful work, as always, Ink. Love in ordinary things, electric! <3
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:15:00 AM
Awwn thank you so very much sweet paige
Date: 11/30/2024 10:29:00 AM
I could swear some days you swallowed poetry whole, your amazing !
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:13:00 AM
Awwn thats such a sweet thing for you to say, thank you sweet rose appreciate you always
Date: 11/30/2024 9:52:00 AM
“Fluorescent fragrance” and “wishful wisterias“ such lovely alliteration and phrases like “So let me close the windows of my consciousness like a sojourner sailing through seas of musical serenity, forever forgotten~ tripping in the aesthetic warmth of your pulsating arms.” Another gorgeous journey through your poetic world! Well done Ink Empress! Best wishes for the contest!
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:11:00 AM
Dear karen it is always such a pleasure hearing from you thank you so very much for your thoughtful and encouraging feedback. Always grateful for your kind support
Date: 11/30/2024 8:45:00 AM
So much to love, bits and pieces I love most are "a violet vortex of undying love" "tripping in the aesthetic warmth of your pulsating arms." hypnotic, Ink! Gl xo
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear anaya so good to hear from you always: sending you light always
Date: 11/30/2024 7:46:00 AM
What a colourful and mystical journey you take your reader through. I'm sure this will place high in the contest. Hope your day is going well IE. Tom
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:02:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear tom, i was truly inspired, im grateful for your kindness and support
Date: 11/30/2024 7:35:00 AM
Not a psychedelic stone left unturned in this one :) I love the pixie - fairy moonwalking :)
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:58:00 AM
Thank you for noticing dear dd , haha a bit of a crazy trip with pixie fairies moon walking it is. Im grateful always for your support
Date: 11/30/2024 7:10:00 AM
IE, I think you have a knack for taking us on fantastic image trips with the words you use. That you choose love as the central theme is a pleasant thing to contemplate for all of us. There seems to be a shortage of it in this world, and this poem adds a very pleasant way to think of it. Midnight eyes blinking like fireflies creates a magic place as do all the images you create. Simply amazing. Smiles!
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:53:00 AM
Dear duke, thank you so much for the smiles and for your thoughtful and sincere comments always. They are truly uplifting! Im grateful always for your poetic presence
Date: 11/30/2024 6:21:00 AM
Dear Empress, today I took a mesmerizing journey through your amazing mystical landscape. For me it was an enchanting and evocative world filled with color and wonder. "as colors of constellations choreograph this theatrical romance." There was such great interplay between nature and the cosmos filled magic that exists in both realms. Your words always inspire me to explore the depths of my imagination. Whenever I read your poems your themes of love, nature, and creativity is truly remarkable FAV! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:40:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear daniel for your kind and generous support as well as your fave. Im always grateful for your poetic presence
Date: 11/30/2024 6:09:00 AM
"as the air serenades an enticing anthem, luring me to a sky sequined with swirling amulets, emanating secrets like rainbow raindrops upon spring-soaked meadows of neon sprinkles." Wow! Whatever writer's ink you are mainlining, please share! Beautiful! "I ponder, will you find me amidst the lilac haze to paint my skin with fluorescent fragrance~" Soooo romantic! Gifted writer. "Perhaps this is what Alice chased through the rabbit hole, a violet vortex of undying love," -- what all writers chase, and hope to catch as divinely and often as you do. Well, I would have to repeat the entire poem to highlight all the wonderful expressions and phases of light. Brilliant read. Thank you for sharing and inspiring.
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:37:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear joe for such a thoughtful and uplifting comment that truly is beautiful. Appreciate your kind support always
Date: 11/30/2024 6:02:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. I am not sure about that journey. Is the person in love with you and you in love with another person with undying love? Thanks for sharing..Sara K
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:30:00 AM
Thank you dear sara appreciate always your kind support
Date: 11/30/2024 4:13:00 AM
trees nestle and mushrooms sigh, oooo damn … spinning electric dreams from harlequin vines and multicolored roses…ooo that imagary is gorgeous,. thoughts swirl through the holographic ethereality, like a pixie fairy.. mmmmm what a realm to be lost in… while galaxies outline the saffron rings with unicorn dust,.. my soul remains entwined with the flickering flames of your lunar silhouette,… mmmmm absolute dream!!!! let me close the windows of my consciousness like a sojourner sailing through seas of musical serenity,… this piece is an amazing trip !! Such a gorgeous transss…
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:30:00 AM
Thank you papi i always appreciate you leaving your comments so sincerely
Date: 11/30/2024 3:56:00 AM
Wowowow ! Tripppppyyyyyy!
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thank you dahlin

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