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Written for the time contest sponsored by Sara Jama

T i m e stops for no one, as searing seconds swerve through seasonal squalls, thawing frost that sleeps upon the necks of onyx roses, where pain is etched in skeletal sins~ across pruned plumes, fleeting through amethyst air, merged in changing frequencies of wind and waves, carrying ballads of a bruised bluebird. But I have long known grief, and I’ve tasted the bittersweet cocktails of life and love. I am s i l e n c e, swirling amidst the wheels of dusk and dawn, like the unseen flares of blazing boulevards, for I am made from ashes of steel, strong to the eyes that see not beyond bleeding sighs. I waltz faster than my fears can grasp, the obsidian t e a r s of petals, leaving each abstract sunset sketched in acrylics on murky meadows, thriving with grieving geraniums. O beloved moon, I see lakes of Elysium through the chained windows of my tortured tower. I breathe against the crystalline concoctions composed from the ink of curved constellations, erasing kismet calligraphies, cluttered with chaotic conclusions, sailing toward an astrological sphere, where colors of love run free against the gravity of diabolical dust, designed on rings of rust. So let me save the twilight sage, before the last drop of wintry rage is no longer tamed by the treacherous tongue of fate, for I am armored against the demonic drumrolls, luring the splitting sea-surge to a bioluminescent shore where Lucifer’s footsteps linger, caressing the edges of snakeskin, mimicking merciless mantras of Medusa melodies, orchestrated in seething strings, oblivious to the t r u t h that I am more than a wounded warrior, dressed in whimsical wisterias. I’ve learned to let go of every faltering feather, that blinded me, pushing my patience into a labyrinth of tilted tulips, tainted with twisted tones and hues of hypocrisy. Remember, I am more than the splitting paranoia, running through corridors of uncertainty, I am flashlights in the monsoon sky~ emanating petrichor pastels upon nocturnal nightingales, singing without words, dreaming amidst trickling chords. ~ and this is the truth of trembling t i m e that halts not for the sleeping supernovas ~

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Date: 2/20/2025 11:44:00 AM
A very sensuous sorrow born of wisdom waking youthful. Yours is a luscious language Poetess. I love how you work the colors, flowers and textures. Another FAV!...J.A.B.
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Date: 2/15/2025 9:03:00 AM
Wow! Nailed it
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Date: 2/6/2025 8:28:00 PM
So heartfelt and beautiful - <3 Light and love on your journey to epiphany
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Date: 2/3/2025 5:46:00 PM
"I have long known grief, and I’ve tasted the bittersweet cocktails of life and love." What a poignant observation of the duplicity of life! You write as if you have confronted life in its contrasting diversities of joy, sorrow, love, resilience, frustration and a desire to break all manacles that chain your soul. This poem is an amalgam of mixed emotions..."I am flashlights in the monsoon sky~ emanating petrichor pastels upon nocturnal nightingales, singing without words," Despite life being challenging, one can still soar. Many of us carry a volcano within, but unlike you, don't have enough words to express how explosive it is. As ever, amazing write. Congratulations dear Empress on your trophy win.
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Date: 2/2/2025 7:52:00 PM
“ballads of a bruised bluebird” ~ !!! And then “oblivious to the t r u t h that I am more than a wounded warrior, dressed in whimsical wisterias” !!! Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, IE. A fabulous write, as always!
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Date: 2/1/2025 9:19:00 AM
Time leaves you with wants and pictures of the past. The ones we couldn't love enough, the love that didn't hold our hands. Our regrets, temptations, goals, and advantages despite our traumas and grief. "Remember, I am more than the splitting paranoia, running through corridors of uncertainty." I always remember the things you tell us to remember. "I’ve learned to let go of every faltering feather, that blinded me, pushing my patience into a labyrinth of tilted tulips." Time teaches a lot.
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Date: 2/1/2025 6:29:00 AM
Hi IE, this poem creates a vision of struggle. We do the best we can in this short life….you seem to be making the best of it despite all the difficulties and entanglements described by your poem. Smiles of course…since what other choice do we have. Time will not stop progressing for any of us. I hope you have a great day now and going forward. Have I told you what a pleasure it is to read your work? It helps me preserve and restore a good feeling inside. I see this won first prize in the contest and that is also a good thing since you deserve recognition. It doesn't always flow in the right direction, but we know we have a nice community here. TY!!
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Date: 1/31/2025 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on placing first in my contest. This poem is exquisitely written. There are so many beautiful lines. "I’ve tasted the bittersweet cocktails of life and love," perfectly expresses the complexities of just living. "I see lakes of Elysium through the chained windows of my tortured tower," expresses what it feels like to be trapped. Like living behind a glass wall, always being able to see life pass by but never being able to actually live. Thank you for writing.
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Date: 1/31/2025 8:00:00 AM
Awwn best comment ever! Chocolate worthy! Thank you so much for my placement and for the inspiring prompt! Your prompts are always so inspiring: and im so glad you liked it as i know you are so pick grumpy! Thank you again
Date: 1/31/2025 5:16:00 AM
Nice win Inky
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much again
Date: 1/31/2025 4:47:00 AM
Beautifully done. Congratulations and God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so very much sweet Gina
Date: 1/31/2025 2:43:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:59:00 AM
Thank you so much was so nice waking up to receiving this
Date: 1/30/2025 7:00:00 PM
I love your poem. Always so much to be delighted about. There will always be TIME to read and enjoy your poetry.
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:58:00 AM
Thank you so much thats so kind of you to say. Always grateful for your kind support
Date: 1/30/2025 6:32:00 AM
"Flashlight in a monsoon sky..." Nice, though I would compare you to the brightest star seen by the naked eye, shining through the dark, a beacon of beauty and hope. Ooh, was that poetic or what lol? Nice one Inky. If I get inspired today I might try this one
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:54:00 AM
Yes very poetic haha. Sounds like Shakespeare to me. I see you were inspired and your poem was very poignant. Thank you for always being supportive. Hope you are doing well
Date: 1/30/2025 5:24:00 AM
"carrying ballads of a bruised bluebird.' -- Great imagery. "I waltz faster than my fears can grasp," Sometimes only way to survive. Good shoes and a careful partner if not a sincere one. ~ "and this is the truth of trembling t i m e that halts not for the sleeping supernovas ~ " And this is the deep dwelling miracle, to come forth from each of us -- a universe of love.
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment dear joe, truly is heartwarming to read. Always appreciate your kindness
Date: 1/30/2025 5:23:00 AM
Dear Empress, Today, as I read this gem, I suddently got caught in your swirl with such raw power, igniting emotions that were intense and transcendent. It feels like a movement through time itself, rich with raw beauty and fierce resilience. Time is so unstoppable! Empress, this artistic piece captures the soul’s deepest truths with a such a haunting grace. A FAV!! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:28:00 AM
Thank you so very much for the fave and also kind and thoughtful comment dear daniel! So grateful always for your support
Date: 1/30/2025 2:15:00 AM
between sufferings ad beauty, the poet advance and his genius prevails, enjoyed the grace of images and sounds, thanks poet
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kindness
Date: 1/29/2025 6:19:00 PM
A transition through time and the human spirit dealing with pain, coping and overcoming. Great messages you have shared using unique words and phrases that is so genuine and creative. A wonderful winner for the contest Ink...
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:23:00 AM
Thank you so much dear michael, appreciate your kind support truly
Date: 1/29/2025 4:28:00 PM
Your stunning poem is beautifully written, with your usual captivating imagery, Ink. I enjoyed every line. Good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 1/31/2025 7:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much always for your kind support
Date: 1/29/2025 4:13:00 PM
Snazzy writing on fleeting time. I liked how each verse had an important word s t r e t c h ed out! The ending is a very fitting climax, Ink. This could be a trophy win.
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Date: 1/31/2025 6:10:00 AM
Thank you so very much sweet andrea, its easy to write for sara as she and i have done so many collabs last five years so its easy to know what she might like for me: but its nice to receive this trophy win from her: as she is very honest too: always grateful for your kind support
Date: 1/29/2025 11:36:00 AM
Your beautiful poem, "Dearest Ink," is about how time moves on its own and how people deal with grief, resilience, and finding themselves. It's about your own pain and loss while also recognizing the beauty and complexity of life. The poem contrasts the passing of time with the emotional landscapes shaped by love and sorrow, ultimately expressing a desire for freedom and understanding beyond mere existence. Phrases like "onyx roses," "amethyst air," and "bioluminescent shore" paint powerful pictures.
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Date: 1/31/2025 6:05:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your detailed comment: appreciate always your support
Date: 1/29/2025 11:21:00 AM
What a wonderful write. Yes, "Time stops for no one." Grief comes in many sizes. Tears are like falling rain. We live through the storms in life to see the flowers once again. "Good Luck" in the contest... Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 1/31/2025 5:57:00 AM
Thank you so much dear kind paula, i wish you a beautiful weekend too: sending you light always
Date: 1/29/2025 2:43:00 AM
- To seize the point of trembling time, Ink ... excellent written :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/31/2025 5:54:00 AM
Thank you so much dear anne lise always
Date: 1/29/2025 2:38:00 AM
Time, they say is a great healer IE, painful memories ease but you never forget. Hope your week is going well, just getting over a bad dose of flu. Feeling a lot better now. Tom
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Date: 1/31/2025 5:54:00 AM
Im sorry to hear about the flu. Please drink some ginger and lime tea it really helps with flu , helps me. Hope you'll feel better really soon.
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Date: 1/29/2025 12:48:00 PM
Never known it so bad, everyone seems to be getting some bug or other.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/29/2025 11:32:00 AM
Us too!
Date: 1/28/2025 11:39:00 PM
I’m inspired by time
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/31/2025 5:53:00 AM
Awwn i know

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