Tears of My Mother

When my mother moaned
As she witnessed her daughter depart this life
I was touched by the glitter in her tears
        Tears of emancipated love,
         The sort ordinary in a woman
         That is not faked or imperfect;
But my father admonished me
That her tears were psychologically adulterated,
That her tears were meant to delude me-
After all fatality of a son is more devastating.
         I did not accept as true what father told me
         For I knew the lie in male psychology
         So I ran from him without looking back
And followed mother to her bedroom
And I wiped away the tears from her face:
         She was my mother
         And I was her son
I could not let her cry alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 10:43 AM
"She was my mother And I was her son I could not let her cry alone." So genuinely expressed the huge Love that bonds a mother to a son and a daughter! Your poetry touches the soul of your reader, HONESTY! My deepest regards and blessings.
Williams Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 11:24 PM
Oh what profound words of yours Honesty. Your mother must be very grateful to have such a lovely son. Bravo....Maria
Haick Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 7:14 PM
This is profound, Honesty...obviously your Mother's gentleness is passed on to you. I love this. Annalise
Sanderson Avatar
May 26, 2012 at 11:29 AM
" very deep words here, but moving I Am touched and pleased i read this. Termendious job Honesy! This one I will remember for years to come. and many there after.....
Duncan Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 4:51 PM
Oh" I so like this very much , I've written 2 maybe three for my mother ,, nicely worded ;} have a blessed day!
M V Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:34 AM
This is very touching,Honesty.Sweet piece of art.Belated thanks for congrats.
Reid-Hansen Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 8:41 AM
Oh no=0( This is sad... But written very well. I can say coming form an Jamaican American background..I was taught the same thing about tears. In my family the men don't cry. A sad untruth to pass down to our children. Good write!
Mehta Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 12:46 AM
Honesty Oimbo - beautiful end wiping mothers tears... perhaps the most divine duty. thnx for for reading & liking my verse "Me still as statue". Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Onclaud Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 4:42 AM
a riveting piece that awes me no end, honesty.. the way your thoughts flowed to give it a last impact is astoundsing! great stuff! :) huggs, nette
La France Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 1:39 PM
This poem is beautiful, the love for your mother is overwhelming, I adore the lines "and I wiped away the tears from her face, she was my mother, and I was her son" does it get any more beautiful than this~~
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Most touching and sensitive HONESTY in your tender words of emotion .. such deep thoughts conveyed to paper my friend.. I was very close to my own Mother and can imagine how she would have reacted to bury a child .. good luck if for the free verse contest with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 4:50 AM
Great work..If based on truth, great kindness and understanding that you have as a person and son..The loss of a child is devastation for a parent..The parent should go first never have to bury a child..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your kind remarks are appreciated..Sara
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 10:35 PM
Very touching Honesty. I cannot picture a father saying that at such a time but I can see the son wanting to show his love for his mother. Thank you for your comment on my little entry. Love, Joyce
Janssens Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 10:14 PM
i am sobbing, this poem is wonderful
Horsman Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 6:11 PM
beautiful and very profound, lessons learn't from real life. love this . Harry
Freeman Avatar
February 8, 2011 at 9:39 AM
She was my mother And I was her son I could not let her cry alone! A great impact, your last lines summing up, Honesty! Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2011 at 10:10 PM
wow, this is very touching and heartfelt, Honesty. I really liked seeing this one as I get ready to leave here for the night. Luv, Andrea Ps is that your real name or a pen name?
Mehta Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Touching and moving memories of your mother you recollected and paid a fine tribute to her, Honesty
Campi Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 3:18 AM
Beautiful, touching, and so sad. Thanks for your comment
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