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Tear Drop Wishes

Tear Drop Wishes She sat in a lonely field crying amidst daises wishing for her smile, when along crawled a green caterpillar She cradled it tenderly in her hands and between tear drops made a wish… The caterpillar glistened as she suddenly sprouted colorful wings and happily flew away from the cocoon of sadness that held her, with her new found friend

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Sofia Ra

Date: 3/21/2017 3:04:00 PM

This is amazing. What a treat to stumble upon your poetry. Beautifully written.

Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:28:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sofia. I am happy you found this one, it is one of my favorites.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/16/2017 10:20:00 AM

You even do romantic fantasy well, Chris. An enchanting poem, my friend. Very well written. Love always.

Chris Green
Date: 3/21/2017 3:28:00 PM

Thanks so very much my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/16/2017 5:46:00 AM

Enchanting tale majestically narrated dear , Chris!

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 8:21:00 AM

Thanks so very much Demetrios for your kindness.

Darren White

Date: 2/16/2017 3:16:00 AM

That cocoon, I know it. But the more I dream my words on paper, the more my wings grow. So beautiful Chris. Sigh.

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 8:20:00 AM

Thanks so very much Darren, keep those wings growing my friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/16/2017 12:50:00 AM

How very very sweet..Such a lovely tale....I think Christina would love this little story in your poem..I did. :).Optimistic message..Sadness is something We can grow out of...at times all it takes is the help from a friend.:)

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 8:20:00 AM

That is so right my Charmaine, friendship can bring a sunny day to any clouded heart. I appreciate your kind words and I am happy you liked this one.

Carol B.

Date: 2/15/2017 11:47:00 PM

Sure would be nice to see this happen. I guess miracles can exist. This piece made me smile :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/16/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thank you Carol. I am happy you smiled during your visit here.

Tim Smith

Date: 2/15/2017 5:18:00 PM

Lovely imagery Chris....I think there is a butterfly in all of us, we just need to believe

Chris Green
Date: 2/15/2017 5:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Tim for your always kind words. I appreciate you my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/15/2017 4:40:00 PM

Very sweet one Chris. :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/15/2017 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Heidi so very much my friend. I always smile when you stop by to read my poetry. Thank you again.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/15/2017 4:03:00 PM

oh how charming an ending what a delightful tale Chris sure is uplifting:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 2/15/2017 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I am really happy you liked this one. I appreciate you my friend.