Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Tear

"Rain is God's tears upon us." By Poet

We need the sun and rain,
over and over again.
They come by God's perfect design,
through His holy bloodline.
When I see the sun,
I see His smile and fun.
When I see the rain,
I see a tear filled with His pain.

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Paula Goldsmith June 21, 2023 at 11:46 AM tear         Date Written: 4/13/2023

Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2023 at 11:03 AM - Congratulations on your win, Paula :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 1:10 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my tear write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..............

Alexis Y. April 16, 2023 at 1:42 PM WoW! Paul, You did a fine job with your chosen word. I found it to be so meaningful. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-)Alexis Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 1:09 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my tear write meaningful. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Nancy Kaufman April 16, 2023 at 4:55 AM This is such a simple pure penning Paula. lovely, lovely, lovely.. Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 1:07 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this tear write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Valsa George April 15, 2023 at 9:05 PM Back to your poem to congratulate you on your first place win dear Paula. Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 1:06 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Constance La France April 15, 2023 at 2:45 PM Paula, thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! I love your quote. ! Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 1:06 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my tear write/quote. Thank You for this honor in your wonderful "T" word contest. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Andrea Dietrich April 15, 2023 at 10:15 AM Sweet and poignant. Congrats for your win Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 1:02 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this tear write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Linda Alice Fowler April 15, 2023 at 8:33 AM Sweet write Paula. Congratulations on your win! :) Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 1:02 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Sotto Poet April 15, 2023 at 8:30 AM You have a gift for words, dear Paula. Congratulations, my friend, on creating a work of such great merit. Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 1:01 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my tear write. Thanks for your kind words. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 15, 2023 at 8:13 AM Dear Paula, your poem is just awesome and divine! What a sublime analogy you have presented! Congratulations on your top win. You really deserved it! Hugs ~ Mala Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 12:55 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this tear write. Your very kind words put a smile on my heart. Thanks...  Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..............

Speaks Volumes April 15, 2023 at 8:08 AM Congrats on your first place. I am not at all surprised. A wonderful poem. Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 12:53 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad to see you back. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris April 15, 2023 at 7:51 AM Congratulations on your top win in the Contest ...Paula. Tear of Joy , always astonishes the Enemies. When God is opening the door blessings , Smile and tear mixing up , some people here " yes , yes, yes ... other there " happy... Wonderful blessings. " Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 12:52 PM Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this tear write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Speaks Volumes April 14, 2023 at 11:20 PM Lovely poem Paula Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 12:50 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Phyllis Babcock April 14, 2023 at 6:08 PM I like the analogy used in your poem Paula. Have a wonderful blessed weekend. love phyl Paula Goldsmith April 17, 2023 at 12:49 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Valsa George April 13, 2023 at 8:53 PM Beautiful analogy dear Paula. God's tears become our blessings and bring fecundity to the earth. All the Best in the contest. Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:46 PM Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you like my "tear" write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Joanna Daniel April 13, 2023 at 8:51 PM Lovely thoughts, Paula:) Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:44 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Gershon Wolf April 13, 2023 at 7:50 PM And when I see the snow?! --- No, God can stay. He doesn't have to go. lol. :) Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:44 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. I say, when it snows He is playing with us as His children. Is He pulling bits of clouds and sending them down??? One day we will know. Have a blessed day writing away..............

I Am Anaya April 13, 2023 at 5:50 PM A great word chosen, Paula, your poems are always uplifting! B0l Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:39 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like this write. I am glad you find my writes to be uplifting. I try to be uplifting. Every now/then I write in a different way. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Joseph May April 13, 2023 at 4:11 PM I like the analogy Paula, Very nicely penned Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:36 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this "tear"write. It give one something to think about. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Kim Rodrigues April 13, 2023 at 3:28 PM Very nice, Paula! Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:35 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Bill Baker April 13, 2023 at 2:36 PM Your poem touched my heart, Paula. Thanks for the uplifting poem. Good entry for the contest ... good luck! Bill Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:34 PM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad to hear my "tear" write touched your heart and was uplifting. That makes me happy. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 13, 2023 at 2:23 PM Paula you did a fantastic job creating this dramatic and stirring poem. Hope your day is wonderful. :) Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:30 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you found this "tear" write dramatic/stirring. It is something to think about. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick April 13, 2023 at 2:22 PM Reads like a good contender for Constance's contest to me. Way to go. I wonder sometimes does He cry over His creation when He sees how people are now living. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:28 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this write. I do think He cries over the things that go on. If you do then He must. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Sotto Poet April 13, 2023 at 1:30 PM Paula, you performed a fantastic job. Your take on the contest is just Ideal. Good luck with the contest Paula Goldsmith April 14, 2023 at 2:26 PM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Your note made my heart smile. Thanks... Glad you enjoyed my "tear" write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Vijay Pandit April 13, 2023 at 11:40 AM Splendidly done, Paula. Perfect for the theme you chose. Paula Goldsmith April 13, 2023 at 12:04 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this "tear"write. Have a blessed day writing away..............

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