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Te'Amo

After all the years of my life She stood still at the foot of the mountain The mountain from the smoke of our dream And saw me coming contented to my knees "Where have you been?" she asked Frantic with the cares I had thrown away Nowhere, I replied, Nowhere that I would have like to have died Love is serious like that The same force that recalls the boomerang Brings you back Poised and curved to be thrown again By the magic of the heart To be swaddled by wind again I mean words that shed our tears Like green leaves of memory From a ragged tree of pain I do not remember ever wanting to die Though death is always so immanent I stayed ahead of it up the mountain Coming down is the tricky part You begin by discarding self As just so much excess of clothes And after all our acquisition to be something You can define me As just God's glory wrapped in dust This is my unique way to talk of love And all the while climbing stairs And parting curtains And climbing stairs and parting curtains To behold the clouds And wonder at dreams own Everest Inside the temple of her breast And then at the steeple's base alone To sit, and review my journey again All up and down the stairs alone And you beside me now, trembling like a stone In a child's hand before the gift

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/10/2010 10:50:00 AM
Please get as many people as possible to read Hush Missing Child <3
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Date: 6/4/2010 12:47:00 PM
So much depth in this poem. Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 6/2/2010 12:01:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today L'nass. Hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
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Date: 6/1/2010 4:58:00 PM
different poem, well done, interesting!!
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Date: 6/1/2010 2:33:00 PM
"To be swaddled by wind" what a line! magestic as always!! Dear Friend I am so glad...you got my poem and commented...I actually felt like I was channeling Van Gogh...I have never had this experience before and so few read longer verses...I hope you wnet on to the end of the verse part2?
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Date: 6/1/2010 2:27:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one..I especially like the third stanza beginning line four to the end of that stanza..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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