Teacher's Pet

It stood watching me in my youth
Patiently – without judgement
Smiling, nodding occasionally
Stifling a gentle laughter

Later it would grimace
Cover its eyes
But never turn away

Other times it would challenge me
To challenge myself
Allow me the vision to see
Become aware
Of my unwariness

I cursed it
For my pain
Accused it of having an agenda
That excluded me
Leaving me to my own devices

Time, that tepid terror,
Would intervene
With a bit of pain
Dip me in a cauldron of chaos
Reminding me
That I am only a character
In Life’s book
Writing my own chapter

((to be continued))
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Empress Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 1:30 PM
Those last lines dear john! Gosh! What a deeply moving poem this is, made me feel so much and its so intriguing too made me wonder if it’s about your teachers pet? Or is it a metaphor for the teacher that encouraged you to be independent and do well. Whatever it is, i truly enjoyed reading this very evocative poem woven in such a seamless manner! The last stanza hits the strongest, i notice that about your poems always, best wishes. Sending you light always
Lawless Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 2:51 PM
it is a bit of a metaphoric analogy...wow does that sound pretentious....Ink, I have found life to be my harshest, fairest, and favorite teacher. Always demanding my best and never grading on a curve. Thanks for stopping by I always enjoy you insight into my writings...
One Avatar
September 8, 2024 at 12:32 PM
I dont think you would every be a teachers pet... unless she was very very attractive...
Lawless Avatar
September 9, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Let's just say that i had a few "moments" here and there where allegedly "great" minds differed..
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