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Taylored Eyes

Taylored eyes accuse me of regarding Women as things to use and to choose like Rats huddled in a cage wanting to read. They scurry to escape: the raptor waits And dribbles saliva, not so clever Thick and ugly, I understand – not good! Inner light reveals creativity But not for this monk and his rosary! Romance – Taylored eyes – be impressed While he counts his sins, each one with regret. Is beauty skin deep, the hunchback wonders? People jeer him anyway, all save one. The arrogant are fools responding where It hurts; ignorant of everything real.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/12/2010 6:07:00 PM
Interesting write! Don't know what "Taylored eyes" means. There is an inner battle being fought here is what this tells me. Still thinking....:) Which is what you are good at, writing thought provoking poems.
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:48:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today David. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 6:43:00 AM
this has sound of medieval times, I love it, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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