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Taste of Fall

A cool taste of fall lingers in the air today with gray and white skies Lush green remains from the rain But, soon the colors will burst Heidi Sands 9/5/21

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Date: 9/6/2021 9:29:00 AM
Love the colors in your poem! Begins with a cool taste of Fall…but soon the colors will burst!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/6/2021 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Kim :)
Date: 9/5/2021 2:34:00 PM
Heidi, Such beauty in a poem called 'Taste of Fall'. Reminded me how I miss the rain. Have to travel far or wishfully watch it on a screen, not to complain. Happy Sunday Heidi. -Richard
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Date: 9/5/2021 8:03:00 PM
I hope you see some peaceful rain Richard. It is pouring again here tonight. Thank you. Happy Sunday :)
Date: 9/5/2021 1:25:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/5/2021 8:01:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/5/2021 12:26:00 PM
It sure feels like weather is changing fast--but there is the reminder that summer is still here and green.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/5/2021 8:00:00 PM
Yes. Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 9/5/2021 12:22:00 PM
Nice penning Heidi, such a lovely touch. Take care,Gordon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/5/2021 8:00:00 PM
Thank you Gordon :)
Date: 9/5/2021 11:39:00 AM
such wonderful description heidi:-) hugs jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/5/2021 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 9/5/2021 8:14:00 AM
Lovely verse, Heidi. I enjoyed it very much. Loved the "lush green remains from the rain."
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Date: 9/5/2021 8:24:00 AM
I am happy you enjoyed it. Very lush green here right now. Thank you. I hope all is well :)
Date: 9/5/2021 7:52:00 AM
Hi Heidi, I enjoyed your metaphors. It sounds like anticipation?? Have a great weekend. Nancy
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/5/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thank you. Yes Nancy. I hope all is well :)

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