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shooting aimless blame careful how you love yourself ~ cupid’s boomerang

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Date: 10/22/2020 1:14:00 PM
Yes you must be careful with those boomerangs! Lovely!
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Date: 10/16/2020 1:40:00 AM
Have to rev up my dendrites to think for this one; enjoying it now.
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Date: 10/14/2020 7:48:00 AM
'Blame-worthy' shots are bound to boomerang. Bullseye, Maureen. Take care and Happy Wednesday! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/9/2020 9:45:00 AM
OUCH Maureen. This really hit home. I need to step down from my pedestal. Beautiful thoughtful words Maureen. Thanks.
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Date: 10/8/2020 8:20:00 PM
Love this Senryu, Mo. So much meaning in such a few lines, thought provoking indeed....Maria Hugs
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Date: 10/5/2020 6:39:00 PM
Like this, Mo!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/6/2020 9:19:00 AM
Thank you! xomo
Date: 10/4/2020 11:03:00 AM
Pigeon Tart Pie, Your poems often leave me in a place between. But I never regret the trip. -Richard
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/5/2020 7:10:00 AM
That’s where I exist, in the between ;), Thank you Richard! xomo
Date: 10/3/2020 7:55:00 PM
Another thought provoking piece Maureen. Truly your work (collectively) is gold. Best wishes. Brian
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/4/2020 9:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Brian. That means a lot, more than you could know. Warm hugs, xomo
Date: 10/2/2020 7:03:00 PM
'aimless blame' - succinct and deep, you hit the mark with this, Mo!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/3/2020 6:50:00 AM
Thank you lovely! xomo
Date: 9/30/2020 7:26:00 PM
Short but deep verse. Pangie xx
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/2/2020 6:06:00 AM
Thank you Pangie! xomo
Date: 9/29/2020 12:27:00 PM
I am practicing on pigeon...wooden ones of course. xovb ~~
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/30/2020 4:58:00 AM
Smarty pants! Hugs and giggles, xomo!
Date: 9/29/2020 12:01:00 PM
That certainly puts you one up on Lindsay! Aloha! Rico
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/30/2020 4:56:00 AM
I am missing that reference, sorry Lindsay ;), mo hugs! xomo
Date: 9/29/2020 11:00:00 AM
Duck when it comes back lol Hope you're well Maureen Tom
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 9/30/2020 4:57:00 AM
Seriously! lol ;D, Ditto Tom, warm hugs, xomo

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