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Tanned September

l. It is September, acrid and tanned: eastern winds grow quite heavy brushing the mountaintops with deepened tints of rosette; and my flesh bakes in the sun while laying on fevered grass. ll. Nightfall drifts along, sweltering... till an oriole drifts low; perched on redwood twigs warbling a cool birdsong, alone that in the middle of its refrain, I find comfort in this dreadful heat. Contest 214 sponsored by Brian Strand Repost 10/1/2016

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Date: 9/4/2015 2:08:00 PM
very lovely Nette gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 9/3/2015 11:57:00 PM
Wonderfully done nette, there u capture the perfect essence of the month! Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/3/2015 9:30:00 PM
You do my month proud, Nette!! this is wonderful. Gosh, I wonder what happened with this contest? At first she said she was closing it out, but with more and more good entries like this one, mine won't stand a chance!!
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Date: 9/3/2015 3:33:00 PM
nette, so beautifully penned, awesome writing, best of luck in the randomling contest, but sure this is a winner and thanks for visiting my dream poem ~~
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Date: 9/3/2015 2:52:00 PM
- I can already feel it in the air ....... summer's last breath (in Norway) - Wonderful written - Good luck in the contest, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2015 2:17:00 PM
funny how the mind can wander to cause a brief moment of escape..good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:45:00 PM
you've captured the essence of summer so beautifully, good luck in the contest:)
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Date: 9/3/2015 12:43:00 PM
The choice of words is quite exquisite as always and there is also a haunting tone to this majestic piece that has a calming quality about it.
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:32:00 AM
Wow, a distinguished poem.You found a place of calm in September's hot wave, and that you took me there with you. The image of "arid" and 'cool" blending together is so comforting!
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Date: 9/3/2015 9:59:00 AM
Soothing and superb!~Olive ELoisa =')
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Date: 9/3/2015 5:15:00 AM
Overwhelmingly poetic, dear nette! Good luck!
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Date: 9/3/2015 5:01:00 AM
Refreshing view of summer which thoroughly delights me. The image of heat with the coolness of a song is invigorating. I'm glad it's spring here, Nette. Excellent poem from a master!
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Date: 9/3/2015 4:40:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Nette I feel very relaxed reading your gentle words:-) hugs Jan xx7
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