Tanka Xv

broken glass on floor my honest little dog leads me over to undiscovered vase shard that my angry eyes missed

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Harry Horsman

Date: 5/11/2022 7:20:00 PM

Keeping one safe, opens the mind. love it.

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/19/2022 3:33:00 PM

Thank you for appreciating my little poem. Carol Louise

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/30/2022 7:12:00 PM

Dear Carol Louise, your gifted and clever pen brings me to the center of this moment.. there is so much here for the heart to savor and for the imagination to conjure. A fantastic piece, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/19/2022 3:33:00 PM

Thank you for appreciating my little poem. Carol Louise

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2022 8:54:00 AM

A lot said here. I threw a glass one time across the kitchen. It left a dent in the wall for months to remind me of my foolishness…and not the only one. Hugs ~

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/19/2022 3:34:00 PM

Thank you for appreciating my little poem. Carol Louise