Talk About Nerve

Ah! The smell of eggs and pancakes on the griddle Olfactory nerve distributes five pounds to my middle

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 12/30/2022 11:26:00 PM

Mmmm, now you have us all hungry!!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/30/2022 10:03:00 PM

I think I gain weight when I smell candy in the grocery store!

John Lawless

Date: 12/30/2022 3:29:00 AM

just walking by the bakery can add...well...maybe just a croissant...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/31/2022 9:12:00 PM

Just one croissant?! Preposterous, said the rhinocerous.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/30/2022 2:51:00 AM

I know the feeling and the actuality of it happening. Right now my stomach is growling wanting food and I should not even be hungry. I want some blueberry pancakes. No today maybe tomorrow said the procrastinator. Thanks for sharing this one. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/31/2022 9:10:00 PM

Usually I can wait. But when it comes to food - nope - can't procrastinate...

Michael Tor

Date: 12/29/2022 10:06:00 PM

lol. You said it best...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/31/2022 9:09:00 PM

I think I have a direct line from my nose to my waist --- line. lol

Marikate Kingston

Date: 12/29/2022 8:36:00 PM

Why doesn't my tummy understand? Christmas cookies are the enemy. Those darn olfactory nerves, the one time you wouldn't mind having a stuffed up nose.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/31/2022 9:08:00 PM

Thanks for the solution, Marikate. I'm gonna get a cold every holiday season. Then I won't want to eat so much. You should go into weight-loss counseling! Smiles, Gershon