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Tales of Gurt & Harry

Tales of Gurt & Harry 
(Pickles & Tickles)

There once was a tart child named Gurt
Who sucked sour balls ‘till it hurt
A green apple pucker
And dreams of her sucker
Made naughty Gurt act very curt.

Now Gurt’s brother was named Harry Larry
his back was so hairy it was scary
When he entered a room
They all cried BABOON!
And they ran round like loons or canaries?

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/17/2010 11:00:00 AM D.G., Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 11/15/2010 12:54:00 PM Hilarious pandemonium abounds in this funny piece Deborah. Many congratulations on your win in pd's contest >> James Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/15/2010 10:16:00 AM Congratulations on your win Deborah in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Daniel Cwiak Date: 11/15/2010 7:22:00 AM This one tickled my funnybone, Deb. Congrats on the win. Dan C Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 11/14/2010 8:50:00 PM Hahaha. Loved it. Many congratulations. Thanks for the advice. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/14/2010 7:47:00 AM Hey TEACH ..congrats in order to u luv for a big win in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful write and win... enjoy with luv this happy Sunday... pupil in luv.. working on JOY..haha.. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 11/14/2010 7:22:00 AM Congrats Deb..I think I know Harry..,.lol BG Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/14/2010 6:06:00 AM Congratulations on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 11/14/2010 4:37:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win, Debbie Login to Reply

Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 10/23/2010 9:30:00 PM Love the limerick Deborah. this is funny. You have my full permission to cut and paste my poem on your blog Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/18/2010 10:27:00 AM Deb, Brian says there are many other rhyme forms deemed acceptable for sonnets. Just choose the one that works best for you. I consider him the authority on such concepts and really miss his presence here. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/18/2010 10:06:00 AM Looks like you had a lot of fun with this limerick, Deb. Best wishes in the contest. Soup Mail returned. Check out the sonnet example given on the Soup under "Forms of Poetry." The rhyme scheme you mentioned is an English sonnet. There are multiple forms of sonnets (from Brian S.) and the example here is the one I emulated. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/17/2010 12:55:00 PM Good luck in the contest with this humorous pickles and tickles....Feel sorry for the Harry Larry...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Duncan Chappell Date: 10/17/2010 4:27:00 AM thank you for that changed my form i see your point ,have a good day duncan Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/17/2010 12:02:00 AM talk about forcing a rhyme. heeheehee. but it's all good with limericks and PD should love this. (or maybe it's somebody else's contest. I can't keep track anymore) Yeah, I tend to not care about haiku rules if the judges don't care how we do them. I have written very few I would ever consider even TRYING to submit to a magazine. I just think they ae fun to do, whether correctly or not! Hope that answers your question, MS inquiring mind!!haha Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 10/16/2010 6:48:00 PM Yup this one's almost as crazy as my limericks get... fun aren't they Deborah? I enjoyed it. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/15/2010 12:03:00 PM cute one Debbie and appreciate TEACH on the spelling check.. sometimes spell check dos not work properly to catch this stuff.. good luck in the contest luv.. pupil... Login to Reply

Nate D. Date: 10/15/2010 10:20:00 AM Deborah, you are full of mysterious smile! Keep your poems rolling with the best side of you. luv' n.d Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 10/15/2010 10:07:00 AM NICE, DEBBIE YOU ARE VERY BRILLIANT*luv~SKAT Login to Reply

Carol Robinson Date: 10/14/2010 9:27:00 AM I just luv it! Hi Deborah I have weitten a "Sista" Poem - its posted now but no dialect - let me know whether to enter it in your comp - Good luck with the Competition Kind Regs Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 10/14/2010 6:08:00 AM Very humrous and intellegent creative write Good luck, Deborah Login to Reply