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I took my last fall ride Down the road Where we could see egg yolks beaten with milk Splattered upon the sweet gum, silver birch and hickory Fall's angular sunlight at just the right time of day Bringing to life those divine colors Almost hurting my eyes with the brilliance And the awesome illumination sent from God The hills came alive with color Rust, yellow, gold, orange, pine green mixed with amber, and brown Like spring's potatoes' skins which fall swiftly Into the waste pail so we can have mashed for lunch Looking upward a vision of longing for design The V of geese flying south If we were to stop, turn off the engine We could hear the honks of them longing for home We could also see Those geese break through a Panting bulldog cloud then disappear Above fall's glorious color as we pass it by A short trip where we stop only once to purchase Apples, apple cider Then aroma surrounds us tempting our tastebuds At home, warm caramel and fresh apples for dessert
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh Contest: Fall Flavors Date Written: 9/12/2022 Theme: Taking A Fall Drive

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Date: 1/3/2023 4:33:00 AM
I am sure it must have been a heavenly ride through the road watching autumn trees in flaming colors and the V formation of birds in the sky. The poem is beautiful with so many lovely images!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/3/2023 12:38:00 PM
Why, thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 9/16/2022 2:08:00 PM
Your imagery is fantastic; this should set the bar higher to the highest in this contest.
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Date: 9/16/2022 2:59:00 PM
I know that there are many for the contest that are excellent because I have read some of them so it will be interesting to see where they all place. Sara
Date: 9/14/2022 11:23:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Sara. BOL in the contest.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2022 1:57:00 PM
Thank you, Jim. Your comments added a new dimension to my page. Sara
Date: 9/13/2022 4:24:00 PM
Colorful poem with appropriate flavers for the contest. Good Luck my friend. Bill
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/14/2022 5:31:00 AM
I am glad you like the colors. Thanks for the luck given. Sara
Date: 9/13/2022 3:08:00 AM
I used to eat a lot of apples, but these day summwe offers lots of plums and melon which I love. Beautiful poem.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2022 7:24:00 AM
Victor, Here where I live apples are a fall crop as are pears. We do have some apple trees, but they are not the best apples. I have made some pear preserves and yesterday some pear pickles. Springtime is for plums and melons are summer. However, these days items can be shipped from around the world for us to enjoy if we care to eat them. Thanks for dropping by. Oh!! If you get some good apples, you can dry some for future use. There are always videos on the internet showing a person how to do it. Sara
Date: 9/13/2022 1:35:00 AM
Wow, this is one colourful journey Sara, and my taste buds in dire straights of want reading your poetic recipe.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2022 7:10:00 AM
Harry, Thanks for the wow. I hope when you went to grocery store you purchased some apples and caramel dipping sauce. Sara
Date: 9/12/2022 4:38:00 PM
Yum. I’d like to come. Sounds like the perfect ending. SuZ
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/13/2022 4:23:00 AM
Suzanne, I am glad it was a yum of a work. Sara

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