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I sat in the car with a blindfold on Just been put on so I cant see To a secret place I have been taken Wonder what will face me. Tried to think if it was a special date Thought about it but nothing springs into mind Listening to nice music, sort of sets the scene Should I be worried, am not the worrying  kind. Didnt know who the driver was this adds mystery Just was asked to trust him i did totally He's guiding me by my arm down a pathway Rings a bell, the door opens, i knew instantly. I could smell his aftershave, one i had bought Has the smell of freshness makes you want more Could feel his arms around me, this is what I thought Its going go be a great weekend one for memories store He took the blindfold off me what a wonderful surprise The room was decked out with flowers, champagne on ice "Happy anniversay for the day we met, best day of my life" Hearts entwined, smiling still was taken to paradise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/25/2013 7:09:00 PM
Seren, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD
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Date: 1/22/2013 2:49:00 PM
Oh a GOOD taken! there sure were some dark ones..this write is like a pallete cleanser ;) sweet as sherbert!Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/22/2013 9:38:00 PM
Thanks Debbie......Seren
Date: 1/20/2013 8:12:00 PM
So romantic! Congrats on your win, Seren! Love, Kim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/20/2013 8:16:00 PM
thank you Kim...Seren
Date: 1/20/2013 12:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/20/2013 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Christopher ....Seren
Date: 1/20/2013 11:41:00 AM
I like the sweet surprise at the end....congrats on your win Seren
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Date: 1/20/2013 2:56:00 PM
Thank you Joseph .....Seren
Date: 1/20/2013 11:09:00 AM
Happy to share a spot with you my friend congratulations xx
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Date: 1/20/2013 2:57:00 PM
Yes we did didnt we, Congrats....Seren
Date: 1/11/2013 5:43:00 PM
luv it a lot
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2013 9:17:00 PM
Thank you very much Miriam ...Seren
Date: 1/11/2013 1:48:00 PM
A very good poem about a nice occaision.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2013 2:02:00 PM
Yes it was Charles thank you for stopping by....Seren
Date: 1/11/2013 1:43:00 PM
what a lovely way to do the theme. Susan is sure to love this! I sure enjoyed it.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2013 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Andrea....Glad you enjoyed it ...Seren
Date: 1/11/2013 2:43:00 AM
Hi there , this is so sweet. love it xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 1/11/2013 3:52:00 AM
Thanks Mandy, ...Seren

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