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Take My Hand

"take my hand" unfree with little air suddenly you passed through soft touches that touch we now stand adventure from the start unplanned each time it must be you our affair lies free show me you truly care words alone will not do still fulfill my heart take my hand SkyWatcher 10-25-22

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/30/2022 9:07:00 AM

A touching poem, Lisa. I took Sara's hand and softly kissed it on our first date, 6 months later we were married, 40 years later we are still experience the unlimited feelings of loving and being loved. Thanks for sharing the importance of taking one's hand and I did with Sara. Hugs, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/31/2022 3:22:00 AM

Hi Bill. Good Morning. Thank you for sharing your beautiful story and moment because it is beautiful. Truly. May you both have more loving moments and years to share. I'm glad you liked my entry. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always. (smile)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/26/2022 1:53:00 AM

This is very romantic. Well written. Hugs

Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/26/2022 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Thank you Victor. Truly. I'm glad you liked this one. Where would the world be without love. May all know of it. Have a beautiful day filled with peace and much more. Love and Blessings always. (smile)

Anil Deo

Date: 10/26/2022 1:38:00 AM

True. Well - said. Shalom shalom shalom Lisa, Lisa, Lisa. Namasthe, healed hand, healing hand, healing hands!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/26/2022 6:38:00 AM

Top of the day to you Anil. Hello Hello. Thank you ever so much as always. Yes, Namaste Shalom and may there always be healing hands for all. (smile) I hope all is well and that you continue to stay safe with your travels. (another smile)