Lisa Ricci Poet Light Verse

Take My Hand

"take my hand"

unfree
with little air
suddenly you passed through
soft touches that touch we now stand

adventure from the start unplanned
each time it must be you
our affair
lies free

show me
you truly care
words alone will not do
still fulfill my heart take my hand

SkyWatcher
10-25-22

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Bill Baker October 30, 2022 at 9:07 AM A touching poem, Lisa. I took Sara's hand and softly kissed it on our first date, 6 months later we were married, 40 years later we are still experience the unlimited feelings of loving and being loved. Thanks for sharing the importance of taking one's hand and I did with Sara. Hugs, Bill Lisa Ricci October 31, 2022 at 3:22 AM Hi Bill. Good Morning. Thank you for sharing your beautiful story and moment because it is beautiful. Truly. May you both have more loving moments and years to share. I'm glad you liked my entry. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always. (smile)

Victor Buhagiar October 26, 2022 at 1:53 AM This is very romantic. Well written. Hugs Lisa Ricci October 26, 2022 at 6:35 AM Thank you Thank you Victor. Truly. I'm glad you liked this one. Where would the world be without love. May all know of it. Have a beautiful day filled with peace and much more. Love and Blessings always. (smile)

Anil Deo October 26, 2022 at 1:38 AM True. Well - said. Shalom shalom shalom Lisa, Lisa, Lisa. Namasthe, healed hand, healing hand, healing hands! Lisa Ricci October 26, 2022 at 6:38 AM Top of the day to you Anil. Hello Hello. Thank you ever so much as always. Yes, Namaste Shalom and may there always be healing hands for all. (smile) I hope all is well and that you continue to stay safe with your travels. (another smile)