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Take My Breath Away

Take my breath away Love me for being my authentic self. Take my breath away Love me when the going gets rough Take my breath away Appreciate the little things. Take my breath away Love me when I'm in my natural state, ( when I'm not glammed up). Take my breath away Love me when I make mistakes. Because no one is perfect. Take my breath away Love me just because and nothing more. Take my breath away Make Love to me without touching me. Take my breath away And my darling, I will the same, and so much more. My darling this is just a simple reminder, because you already…… Take my breath away Inspired by " The Love Me Like You Mean It" contest Sponsor: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver 12/15/19

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2020 2:36:00 PM

Great verse, Alexis, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/19/2019 1:29:00 PM

I agree totally w/Teppo ... fabulous lyrics this poem would be, Lexi. Really got much LOVE for these lines: Love me just because and nothing more. Take my breath away Make Love to me without touching me. That's some kinda wonderful poetry. Sun glow poetry! LAMBLA! Love and more blessed love always!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2019 5:15:00 PM

very original how you chose to do this challenge. Very endearing too.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/16/2019 5:57:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I really appreciate that coming from you. I'm glad you liked it. Enjoy the rest of your day my friend:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/16/2019 8:48:00 AM

very romantic lines Alexis, good luck. Tom

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/16/2019 6:19:00 AM

Beautiful, romantic, splendid write, Alexis.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/15/2019 11:13:00 PM

Alexis, what a wonderful family you are and how luck to have met and take each others breath away. You are a darling friend, and I love you dearly. Best wishes. Blessings Alexis, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/15/2019 9:18:00 PM

Aw, your husband is certainly a lucky fellow, my friend. Blessings and Joy, Gershon

Laura Leiser

Date: 12/15/2019 9:10:00 PM

Beautiful words, Alexis! :)

Na Na

Date: 12/15/2019 7:13:00 PM

Very good Lexi I liked it. I kept singing the song Take my breath away by Berlin :)~. Best of muck in the contest